Reviews for Fighting The Green
noulis chapter 11 . 2/26
I love your story. I love it i love it i love it.
also, it's interesting how Harry looks from Ron and Neville's pov, a lot like Draco:D
Diverging Patronus chapter 11 . 2/26
Is it wrong I really want Harry to fit in more with the Slytherin crowd? You kind of hinted at it last time with Regulus and Snapes discussion about how he was like the earlier version of the dark lord...I can't wait for this story to get more laid out! I have a feeling it's going to get epic!
Geez! Harry will always be between a rock and a hard place!
Love this story!
history chapter 11 . 2/26
I continue to like your story and your character! Some review said that Harry is nasty.
I don't think. I think that Neville and Ron are as nasty with Harry that they are with him (and i don't think that they would follow him as he did in this chapter).
Diverging Patronus chapter 10 . 2/25
Oh man...I kinda do and don't want you to get to chapter 15 if it's going to slow down xD! I love this sooo much!
Update soon!
WeirdCornChip chapter 10 . 2/25
Crud. Dat last sentence. Noooooooooo. Pretty cool how being friends with Theodore presented harry from getting killed. It feels like 80% of the people in your story have something wrong with them. This is awesome how you wrote a bunch of chapters at once.
lucky333123 chapter 10 . 2/25
Uh oh!
mordicus18 chapter 10 . 2/25
As a harry potter fan, i wanted to know why james and the marauder are so adepte to condamn the slytherin in your story ? In the original yes they were but in their teen time. Did you remeber that harry s grandmother was a black and a slytherin... Euh where is the logic ? I dont know if it s only me or not but i found that you make harry a lot of compliments from the others but in reding i can t quite found these qualities. It s like the other characters are biased like hadrian who found harry smart yes but no so that he deserved it., anyone with comonsens who haved the same thought. The admiration towards harry is so easily given that i found it unbelivable sometimes. Yes the mqin ch character need to be unique and stronger than the othet but i didnt see it clearly in the story.
Diverging Patronus chapter 9 . 2/25
Oh my god! I need more! I was so prepared to hit the next button! I was so happy when I actually saw this updated! I'm going to follow this now lol!
Please update it's so addicting!
SherWatsonLocked chapter 9 . 2/24
Im really enjoying this so far and looking forward to more soon! :)
hotcat chapter 9 . 2/24
thank you for new chapter :D
WeirdCornChip chapter 9 . 2/24
I LOVE This story. You made Theodore a real person and he is a creeper but I see where he gets it from and feel so sorry for him and I don't know whether to be relieved or extremely annoyed that James picked harry up. LOVE THIS STORY. All you people who read review to see if this is worth reading, stop reading reviews and Read This Story.
BunnyCowLuva chapter 8 . 2/24
This "review"/comment follows the one I left for chapter 9, because I haven't reviewed in YEARS and wasn't aware that we can only review once per chapter now... sorry,

oh right, and I like how Harry isn't exactly a perfect being in the story and does have some flaws and worries and tears. His dislike for Neville because he was forced to play nice for years is real enough, and that prank with the spiders, I laughed too. Did I think it was mean? Of course. Dangerous, considering his volatile magic? Definitely. That's why he is a first year, not older. That's why he got his hand bit by a dragon. You just do things because you feel like doing them sometimes, believing that it won't be too bad.

On the topic of age, there are moments when I questioned if Harry or Theodore really knew some of the words they said to each other though...

but yeah. Just a thought... ;;
BunnyCowLuva chapter 9 . 2/24
Your fic is great, and this characterization of Theo - of everyone and everything, really - really explains a lot; I still remember the old fic, and I'm just so glad you're back. Thank you for making my day. There are grammar mistakes here and there, but then I was too busy reading your new chapters to really note them down.

I know this isn't exactly a very helpful comment in terms of helping a writer improve, but I'm just really, REALLY happy to be reading your story again.

I liked all those tiny little changes (e.g. Dobbie, Tom Riddle, etc.) and the chekhov's gun (e.g. THE ring?) too, by the way. The moment where Harry realized his Housemates was actually - dare I say - "worried", and that he wasn't really alone in his own House was all feels... Oh, and I enjoyed those mysteries quite a lot too (e.g. Harry choosing Peter and what it means, who that ghost that Harry shouldn't meet really is... blah blah blah) - I'm sure you know your own fic more than I do so I seriously shouldn't be reciting all those parts that I liked to you.

I liked all of it anyways. :P

ANYWAYS, right, thank you for writing.

I'll be waiting patiently for your next chapters. Don't worry; I've waited all these years for your revamp anyways, so do take your time. :3 (Ooooo this is so exciting )
Guest chapter 8 . 2/24
I really like how the friendships develop and the battle with Voldemort was well written :)
Ann chapter 8 . 2/23
Some people are saying your Harry's not nice. Ignore them. I think his first fight with the Weasleys and Neville shows high moral character, though I don't think that the way you had him speak is typical of six year olds. He is incredibly mean but most children are, and the twins are a lot meaner. The twins are sadistic. But you haven't made him a paragon of the dark side - that's refreshing in ff. And you don't have him talk politics in first year. I like that. Could do with some editing but on the whole pretty decent.
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