|Reviews for A Potter's Hands|
| goldenlucario1 chapter 1 . 1/4
Yes, I was indeed overboard! XD (Which isn't bad at all) LOL I laughed so much at the many cheesy parts but then again I think you would think that if you truly loved someone that deep :') I never read lemons, still don't but even then I just LOVE the way you describe their relationship, just like in that other fiction of yours with the main paring DeiSaku. This is the total opposite of pointless and plot-less smut. Like, for instance, the following descriptions I love to read! "breath against her neck :)", "embrace/wrap his arms around her" , "brush his nose against hers" and "hover her lips over his ear,barely touching" and other crap like that (FYI I call things 'crap' sometimes when I like them) Yes, it gives you the warm feelings! . And I love it when someone stares at someone else only to get caught and be embarrassed! XD Yeah, actually I have been abandoning the romance-section because of my disappointment but I thankfully stumbled upon your DeiSaku fic and now I have a will to read again! :D Wayya go!
| BriEva chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
Wow this was beautiful. I want to read when he found out so I'm going chapter surfing. To tell you the truth, given the beginning of Ripple this fits much more than Sakura and Itachi. I wish this was how the story continued on, but given what you wrote they had a falling out and it woud never be. I will this alternate world continued though. I mean it seems as if Sakura became inportant to the members of Akatsuki, or at least a select few. Kisame even seemed rooting for her and Deidare. So what would have happened after their first night? How would Itachi react?
| BoomPowMina chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
I cried like a baby when i first found out Deidara died...he didnt deserve to die! He was forced into Akatsuki! He could have jusst stayed in his temple and enjoy art and life, but noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Akatsuki had to ruin it...damn them...
| young kagome chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
I found it! Yayayayyyy this was wayyyy cute! I adore it! I'm tempted to read your other Dei/Saku story but I don't think your going to continue writing it. And I hate reading stories that aren't going to be finished. But excellent job an I will read some of your other stories that aren't on hold. Keep up the great work!
| Cherryqueen567 chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
I certainly luvd this story at the Author Note i almost cried. I rly wanna c Dei-kun too. And plz do update ur Heart of an Artist Hands of a Killer because u friggin left it on a friggin cliffhanger .
| Shinjuuki chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
| The.Akatsukis.Fallen.Angel chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
i was depressed when Deidara died too... and to be beat by Sasuke of all people.i like the sharingan it's cool and all but it seems like such a cheat the way Sasuke uses it. (i actualy like sasuke, he's just pissing me off a little more with each new episode though)
| ilysfmdemetri chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
I was thinking u should do a spin off, of this xD It was so GOOD :D
| craizypet chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
awwwww... it is so cute!
if that story was a colour, it would the softest yellows and golds and whites of midday sun, when you are standing in a courtyard looking up at the sun, with your eyes half closed. or maybe when the sun sets, and a gold hue is cast over everything.
i know, so cliche, but thats how i see it.
| GagaRouxxx chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
Awww! I just cried. :( God! Your stories are turning me to mush! People are supposed to fear my reviews, you know? Beware the hard-ass. It's still in my nature though. Ugh. But anyways, this is the 2nd time I've cried. I also did when DeiDei-Kun died, yeah.
| Cayla chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
In the real story you should bring deidara back just for the hell of it. Like someone used a secret justu on him and he came back that would be AWESOME YO!
| sleepyseagull chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Deidara can be so kawaii when he wants to be :3
| MiyuCat chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
Wonderful . This was really good and I definitely prefer it to the original. Deidara is the best character ever... I decided that Kishi is the one writing the fanfiction, and we are the ones who really know what's going on! He can go and live in a toilet, he's a sexist pig anyway. Great story! Thankyou for posting it! x x x
| ChinaDollMaiden chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
So cute! Nice ending!
| Koi no Mega Lover chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
-sob- You made me cry!
Damn, I ADORE DeiSaku, especially when he's like this ;-;