Reviews for The Forbidden Fruit
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Beautiful
j5girl31012 chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
that story was beautiful simply amazing
Le Crepuscule chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
this is one of the most creative things i have read on fanfiction... well done!
Kennie Loves 'HP'TCoN'TIC chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
that was really really good!
twilightlover333 chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
Loved it!
VampsMoonAngel chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
Nice story. To bad that it's only a one shot. It would be nicer if you could write this story with more chapters.
bitemeplease235 chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
this was amazing and beautiful (as usual!) and i loved all of it. you're such a great writer, managing both serious stories and the humorous ones as well. please continue writing!
juliet233 chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
That was really great! I like how the poem is interwoven with the story, and the apple symbolism at the end works perfectly with everything going on.
Lise Steiner chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Amazing. The poetry is great, and so is the story. And you're a very good writer.
angietheunicorn chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
nice. i reasly like the poetry.
Merciless Ruby chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
Nice story! I enjoyed it!
Random Little Remus Lover chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
adorable simply possitively adorable. Completely and utterly loved it with my entire heart. apsolutely the best.

R.L.R.L.
FredFanatic chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
This was a beautiful story. Very well written, and very Bella-and-Edward. The characters were very much in-character. I love the way you combined the poem with the story. It was lovely.
DrowningxInxSapphire chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
I really liked that poem! You're a good writer!

I have a request. Could you write a story based on Edward and Bella passing notes?
Sohma56 chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
Aw...So good!
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