Reviews for A New Destiny
Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
Grave Wolf chapter 3 . 4/2/2008
Nice insertion of Ranma into Guyer. But what happened to pressure points and speed? Will Ranma ever regret atomazing zoanided pops?
Gelionlegends chapter 2 . 7/27/2007
yeah like this chapter, have you been watching the new series episode 2.

though i don't see anything wrong with it as it does help place ranma finding out the name an how to use it.

i was wondering why hinako was glaring at ranma though i can understand the other two but not her?

wonder if now that his ki is enhanced in booster form will he try and learn to use his ki without emotions as he could get alot more power out then. and from the experience on how the zoanoid dodged his ki blast he i think is going to try and make up a new attack that will be faster than his old one like his head beam though maybe he wont say it out loud as it does give the enemy a chance to block or dodge.

though i am surprised that he didn't use his forbidden techniques like the vaccum blades as they are much fast i think than his basic ki attack moko.

though you do wonder how and when he will get the chance to train and what he tries like in the armour or with out then on.

along with figuring out what other weapons and abilities the guyver gives him.

that and if he can still use his ki to boost his physical abilities even more now with the armour on or not, though he can still do the ki blast but enhance the body well that will be something to see along with his armours weapons and any new techniques because of this?

though you do have to wonder how well ranma will fare with fighting lisker, as with what i understand lisker is a trained soldier but how well in the martial arts like ranma as both would be on equal footing except for the use of ki that ranma has, so it would be down to skill and knowledge of the guyvers weapons, abilities and powers.

as in episode three or four lisker says the head beam or infared

laser uses heat, to power it or some such thing so one of his martial arts techniques could help as the soul of ice lowers the tempeture so something got to increase it and that could enhance the power of the beam, or he learns something with the units other abilities to do so?

though i am surprised to see the reporter here so early but it does help get the story moving with it crossing over with ranma.

wonder if any of the tribes in the valley that the amazons come from are decended from the zoanoids?

well i do agree with the others that some spell checking and such need to be done, but i still enjoyed it even with such is in there.

i hope this doesn't put you off and some one does come forward to beta for you.

so hope to see another one of these chapters soon and thanks for continuing.
Cloudwannabe chapter 2 . 7/27/2007
You need a spell check or a beta reader because thers lots of typos and some minor plot errors, but other than that its an ok read keep at it.
Hiryo chapter 2 . 7/27/2007
Please get one pre-reader since then you'll get even more readers that can enjoy that really good story!
Upgrade chapter 2 . 7/27/2007
You really need an editor, but good otherwise.
Dumbledork chapter 2 . 7/26/2007
Nice chapter. But you should really run a spellchecker.
Darkepyon chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
Interesting begining i think i have only seen this cross ounce and it was like only 3 chapters i hope you go past that.
Rydan fall chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
Gelionlegends, there isn't any Sailor Moon in this story!

What the others say about it needing some editing.

But I "really" hope that you will continue.

ps: You might want to transform Ranko into a zoanoid-monster/creature (maybe a lord{-in}?), even if it's only for an omake.

How they could have captured her you ask?

Sleep-gas or something like it.

Wonder if Ranko could fight the reprograming and if a Guyver unit gives you some protection against it.
Gelionlegends chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
nice finally a ranma, guyver and sailor moon hope it continues as the last two or three have had two or three chapters and they then stop really disappointing.

one thing i dislike well the units you could have had all three units undamaged and unit 1 found by sho second unit now that is found by Agito and the third unit found by ranma just to give it a bit of a twist.

ever read "more than meets the eye" thats a good but unfinished and also unresponsive author.

ever been to a site called warrior guyver as they have a lot of indo on the zoanoids and guyvers, they even have made up different types of guyvers. heck ranma turning or enhancing his unit by upgrading it, i know that the gigantic unit is an upgrade but i mean an upgrade in the normal unit mk2-upgrade enhancing the unit with new tech and refining and improving what the unit has and doesn't have.

though guyverreborn site does fill in the gaps that the other site has.

heck i could see ryouga ending up getting zoaformed if he isn't careful unless he wants to?

i hope ranma doesn't get paired with anyone from nerima beside kasumi or hinako though hinako could be a zoanoid? maybe someone from the sailor senshi.

well it will be interesting to see what Chronos and dr Hamical Valcus and others think and do as i am sure the zoanoids heard what the boys said as it being weird as nerima. they must have date on the martial artists there and the use of ki and other thing like magic though they may very well have some on the Juuban area as well?

so i hope this doesn't turn you off writing more of this story and i hope to see another few chapters.
Upgrade chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
Needs some editing, but otherwise a good start.
RanmaChaos chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
Good story! Please continue to UPDATE!
Kamen Rider Wizard chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
Great story.
Jerry Unipeg chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
GREAT START! (*x4) Nice twist to the story line.
Dumbledork chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
I like the idea. But so far you have only replaced Sho with Ranma. But I'll read next chapter. Oh, and you should reread thi chapter. There are a lot of spelling mistakes.