|Reviews for Anesthetized|
| Mengsk chapter 5 . 6/24/2010
Raven's mind. Completely changes the parametres of the story. No more tape for a start.
Not sure I like this jump storywise but - man is this funny!
That's another thing! This started out a tragedy! BB murderer, but I'm laughing my head off! Pick a theme!
| Mengsk chapter 3 . 6/24/2010
This Pokemon plan is equal part clever and utter cheese.
Though I (surprisingly) have no problem with the dragon. Raven's very existance suggests they exist as well.
| Mengsk chapter 2 . 6/24/2010
I am so glad you kept up the interviews because they are awesome. Not sure how I feel about the beast being able to transform. It makes sense. I guess. It does suggest a presense of mind though. Which kind of makes it less cool.
What is it's objective? Get out of the cage certainly, but why does it keep coming back if Raven is safe? Where is it trying to go?
| Mengsk chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
Is Starfire with you?
That may be the greatest save of all time.
But for killing Rancid... Well, I was going to say BB's seen Raven hit worse before but - no one likes Rancid. Complaint withdrawn.
| Electric Plum chapter 7 . 4/30/2010
Loved it! I can't wait to read more! -EP
| Somewhere In Time chapter 7 . 3/3/2010
I think this is an excellent story, and I relished reading all the chapters that are here so far. It is serious, yet made me laugh at places at the same time.
| AWordToTheNot-So-Wise chapter 7 . 2/25/2010
This story is completely ingenious! I love how you took a popular concept and completely refurbished it (Thank You!). The only critiscism I have is that I wish your chapters had more length to them (Sorry can't help it I read too much). Other than that your work of art is a gem. I eagerly, but also patiently, mind you, await your next installment.
P.S. Please don't neglect "Visions of an Apocolypse" either, thank you.
| Menamebephil chapter 7 . 2/22/2010
Dogs. Cats. Living together. Mass hysteria. You get the idea.
Also Beelzebub would like to discuss with you the sudden increase in his heating bill.
| Bigguido chapter 7 . 2/22/2010
wicked story keep going want too see what is going to happen.
| Novus Ordo Seclorum chapter 7 . 2/22/2010
I was scrolling through the first page of stories when I came across your update and involuntarily shouted "Hell yeah!" in response. Now everyone sitting around me is giving we weird looks, but that's alright...it's worth it. Anyway, onto your update!
I enjoyed this installment quite a bit. The opening sequence was really funny. As I played it out in my mind, it was doubly so. I could imagine the whole scene playing out and couldnt help but smiling. It clearly goes to show that Beast Boy's affect on Nevermore is quite substantial. Though he (fortunately) isn't doing anything altogether negative in any way, he does have an impact merely by interacting with Raven's emotional aspects.
I also liked how you addressed Raven's emotions as being "sentient batteries." THAT was cool. Most people tend to assume that Raven's emotions know everything that Raven herself dows, when clearly that is not always the case. They may know when they ar ebeing used, but the don;t necesarily know the reasoning behind it, which is rather intriguing. To me, this concept makes a lot of sense. After all, if her emotions knew everything that was going on, there would be no need for emotional turmoil, as every sentiment would be on the same page. It's a new twist, and I like it.
Anyway, magnificent job as usual. While I haven't been waiting two years for the update as some people have been, I will say that I enjoyed it immensely nonethless. There is just something about your writing style that I find really engaging...it makes your stories incredibly readable. Fantastic work! Hope to see another update soon!
| Denalien chapter 7 . 2/22/2010
Aww that was sweet :3
| Agent of the Divine One chapter 7 . 2/22/2010
LOL! xD Well even if Raven didn't "fart" whatever subconscious response was triggered was quite hilarious judging from the reactions of those mentioned.
And with Beast Boy in Raven's innermost mental sanctum the hilarious situations are only going to increase in frequency.
| Lambbaby chapter 7 . 2/22/2010
People like you make me feel sucky. You go away for two years, come back and just hop right back on the awesome story train and pump out a fun chapter like it's nothing. You guys all suck.
(There's a compliement in there .I promise.)
Anyway I like this.I'm sure you've heard this like 8 million times from me and will be sick of it by the time you end this it's true. You're good and this story is progressing nicely.
The fart joke was perfect cause I'm a 12 year old under all this girly-ness and really Raven did tell him that if he pulled Rude's finger he deserved the consquences even if they included ending up mostly murdered.
The over-use or unexpected use of Timid is a nice mention. I'm thinking I know why Timid is used more often than not but I'm keeping all thoughts to myself until I'm sure.
And yes, Raven does think pointy ears are are fangs and the fuzzy green boys who wear them.
Now I'm not sure what happened that you needed a two-year hiatus cause I know for a fact real-life can kill all creative urges, and really I can't throw stones cause have you seen how often I update? But I enjoy your work and hope (fingers crossed) that I see more from you before 2012.
| hydroknight01 chapter 7 . 2/22/2010
Ooh... something's getting funky in there now, huh? And of all of them, Timid is the first to notice... Things are on the shakeup in Nevermore, and I for one am liking where this could go.
Nice to see you getting back to this one after so long - two years, and you're back at it like you never missed a beat. It's almost like you never went on haitus.
Keep up the awesome work, and keep them chapters coming... in your own time, of course...
| Wolvmbm chapter 7 . 2/22/2010
This entire story so far does seem like a great one, as I have read mostly all of the chapters so far.
However I must ask of something, is this story a bit of a romance story as well since Beast boy is within Raven's mind and that she's doing it because she cares about him and may have feelings for him beyond friendship if possible ?
Because if so, then it would make this story seem a little bit more interesting. :D
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline idea. ;)