|Reviews for Why Can't I?|
| thewonderingman chapter 39 . 12/8/2012
what your not going to finish it frowny face, thats so sad, I love this story, its all lovey dovey, hilarious and action packed, theres not a lot of sotries out there like that, so I'll wait, hpefully you will, put out another chapter.
| thewonderingman chapter 37 . 12/8/2012
You my friend (if I can call you that?) have shocked me, what a deliciously evil thing to do I like it, oh yeah before I forget, best dragonball z story by far, you really are pretty amazing, so keep up the good work.
| thewonderingman chapter 36 . 12/8/2012
either krillin saves her or she beets him up, since I don't think you would be so cruel as to have her lose her virginity to a freak like him anyways, lets see what happens.
| silverhawk88 chapter 21 . 11/26/2012
Well this story series is my favorite series that I am reading it again. It is that good. I can't wait for the next installment.
| Guest chapter 39 . 9/29/2012
u left out a lot of suff
| Guest chapter 31 . 8/13/2012
I just remembered! What happened when Rikku when to Roshi's past while Roshi was peeking at one of the girls?
| FYI chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
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| Taeniaea chapter 38 . 9/20/2011
| Viscorra chapter 4 . 7/23/2011
I've noticed something in the last few chapters, small technical errors. Like in the first chapter you called Goku "she" and in this one I think you called Rikka a "he". Likewise I've noticed letters missing from words occationally. Like... chapter 3 I think, was missing the "t" off of "the". Small things, I kinda forgot about it on the 1st chapter though since you distracted me with Vageta's comment about Goku eating anything.
I still think that's my favorite comment. I had to read it several times before I could continue.
| Viscorra chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
I'll admit it, I almost didn't bother with this story. To me Goku had always been that little boy in Dragon Ball who couldn't figure out why Bulma didn't have a "pillow" like him or his grandpa did. Heck I was half convinced Chichi had to get the doctor's assistance to create Gohan and Goten. That being said I'm quite glad I did read this, because you managed it without corrupting my image of Goku you finnally made him... if you will, grow up. If only a little. Now I'm hooked so I shall go read on!
| Daniella chapter 17 . 5/14/2011
Loved this chapter. It's been a while since I watched DB and DBZ. I love how your writing is detailed enough to remind me of the episodes but at the same time not too boring.
| Daniella chapter 12 . 5/14/2011
Man I sweated when Rikku started undoing her pants! Thank you Krillin! Wow, its so different to see things on the saiyans end. Vegetas personality I think shows itself quite well. No wonder he got so strong.
| Daniella chapter 10 . 5/14/2011
Wow, I totally agree with you about that fight scene. The stink man's tacticts gross me out to this day. Poooor Krillin- thank goodness for him randomly missing a nose
Another great chapter! I think I'm starting to like this story more and more. I think your writing has improved too!
| Daniella chapter 10 . 5/14/2011
Wow, this is such a good story. I can't wait to see how Goku being a girl will change thing! It's so interesting how differently girls and boys are treated. Goku has the same personality but a very different experience. I love how you portray her innocence.
I also love how although your story is detailed you know when to skip episodes and get tot he good part. This story would be long indeed if you wrote about each episode!
Luv it- keep it up!
| Daniella chapter 7 . 5/14/2011
Wow, thi story is great. You are really brave to redo all of the dragon ball series and further- from a different perspective.
I Love long stories that are not rushed- so this is a pleasant surprise. When I started to look at Goku as a girl fanfics I was not expecting to find something like this!
Great job! I really like it so far.