Reviews for Flesh Wound
friendly chapter 3 . 7/28/2007
great job. that was good
supernaturaldh chapter 3 . 7/27/2007
Great story... loved the brotherly love!
TammiTam chapter 3 . 7/27/2007
You pulled it off, and it was great! I seriously thought he was ghoul bitten! Awesome story.
thursdaywench chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
oh, awesome, awesome...must now keep reading. love the humor mixed in dear, it's excellent!
Magnificently-In-Love chapter 3 . 7/26/2007
great job! i loved it!
ziggy.uk chapter 3 . 7/26/2007
You certainly pulled it off, big time, the final chapter was awesome! So Sam got septicaemia, probably scratching at the wound on his hand infected it and caused it to spread! Could just imagine Dean's panic at Sam unconscious in the car, and could totally relate to his anger at Sam keeping it from him! That said though, they are both guilty on that count, and they need to learn that it is not a burden to share secrets, more of a burden keeping them from the other! Plus Dean seeing the history and what Sam had been looking up on the laptop, Sam was totally sprung on that one!

Loved the ending with the apologies and 'jinx', a little childhood fun which was so needed by both brothers as a release from all the emotion! And the clasp of the hand just said it all!

As usual your story was perfection, well written, entertaining and a great read! Fantastic, loved every word, thanks!
carocali chapter 3 . 7/26/2007
Cool ending! I think you pulled this off beautifully! So much is left unsaid, but they really only need each other. I wonder if Sam will ever confess about Mary...

Nice brotherly banter, love the hovering. What a lovely little nugget for a summer's day!

:D

Caroline
sammygirl1963 chapter 3 . 7/25/2007
Awesome ending to a wonderful story! Dean had the right to be upset with Sam for keeping the infection a secret-and nearly costing him his life!
Poaetpainter chapter 3 . 7/25/2007
A very awesome fic!

Congrats on completion!
maxandkiz chapter 3 . 7/25/2007
O.K. wait a minute. That's not really the end is it?

Loved the story. Amazing how quick they are to jump on each other about secrets. Maybe this will make them think twice about any more secrets. Yeah, right! Great job! Waiting patiently for your next story.
kokoda2007 chapter 3 . 7/25/2007
Fantastic, well written ...as always. Now, a new fic please.
K Hanna Korossy chapter 3 . 7/25/2007
Oh, I'm sorry this is over! Good points on all sides. Touche.

And just for the record, bench seats don't go back on the passenger side. It's kinda all or nothing. :
Kaewi chapter 2 . 7/24/2007
Oh my gosh, I absolutely love this fic so far. I also really love JJ Phoenix's heatstroke fic, so the heatstroke in this one is like icing on the cake. There's just something about a totally limp and out-of-it Sam...

Anyway.

Can't wait to see where this is going! The brothers really need to learn to communicate with each other. It would make life so much easier ;) Although I think Sam does owe it to Dean to tell him if it gets bad, otherwise he's risking Dean giving up his soul only to have Sam die.
ziggy.uk chapter 2 . 7/24/2007
Yeah, finally the site let me read this awesome second chapter! Why is Sam dreaming about the ghoul and why is it giving him injuries, even after Dean has decapitated it and salted and burned it? You got Dean's reluctance to let Sam out of his sight spot on, it must have been so traumatic for him for Sam to collapse and die in his arms! But Sam must share his dreams with Dean, it will not add to Dean's burden if he shares what is going on in his head and shows him the ghouls injuries! Dean's burden will be added to with the worry if Sam just keeps telling him he's fine when he blatantly isn't!

Loving this story so far, awesome writing!
ziggy.uk chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
Great first chapter! Loved how Dean escaped from the hospital to go find Sam and that after searching for 4 hours he was only a minute or so away from where the impala was parked! But heat exhaustion is not good and Dean needs to act fast to rehydrate and cool down his little brother! And Sam is not in too good a state to begin with, neglecting his health while concentrating on a way to get Dean out of the deal! Not forgetting that Dean is not 100% either but at least he has had hospital treatment!

There is also the little matter of the ghoul who needs to be got rid of! The benevolent spirit may have been trying to help but both brothers have ended up worse for wear!

Looking forward to chapter 2 but the site keeps saying it's not there at the moment!
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