Reviews for Paradise Lost
mamahd chapter 15 . 6/20
Oh gosh this story is so perfect. Please please come back to it. I love that Blaise has chosen a side. I love the bond between Severus and Hermione. I love Harry's distrust and that Hermione and Severus kept the twins!
Guest chapter 15 . 6/18
Please please please continue this story/series! It is the best HP fanfic I've ever read!
itscheriee1 chapter 1 . 5/18
OMHYGOD HOW AM I SUPPOSE TO READ THIS KNOWING IT'S NOT YET FINISHED AND WILL BREAK MY HEART OH GOD PLS
Guest chapter 15 . 5/12
Please finish this story.
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madeleine.byers chapter 15 . 4/13
I really hope this isnt abandoned i absolutely love this story.
Poor Hermione.
Poor Blaise.
So many emotions
xxxlenaleexxx chapter 8 . 1/23
I like your symbolism ma'am! And it IS frightening! Frightening indeed since we get a glimpse of what he becomes... oh dear. And Hermione has grown so much! If I can quote The Verve for a moment. "Cause it's a bittersweet, symphony this liiife!" Too true right now!
Do we get Blaise in the next chapter?! I hope we do! And I need some Snermione cuddling. It's been awhile and I need a hug. These are hug worthy times after all!
This sad sad business about the baby is sad! :( I mean I understand... but it's still really sad! Also loving your Ron right now! I do so love for people to write him the way (I believe) he was meant to be.
xxxlenaleexxx chapter 6 . 1/21
It IS Lavendar! ...I think. You're setting her up that way at least; but she coul also be a distractor from the real traitor. Idk! Sometimes I can't tell with you! Anywho man... Harry remaining in his over angsty phase in these flash forwards is annoying and also extremely disturbing. And I feel like Blaise being a stalky mcstalkerson is supposed to be creepy maybe buuut I love it! And I really can't wait for his conversation with Hermione! What will he say? What will he think? I need to know!
xxxlenaleexxx chapter 5 . 1/20
I think Lavandar is the traitor...not sure why I think this. I hope not but...idk.
Also yay! FINALLY! That's all we needed. Just a quick 'hey so by the way beloved please keep in mind that I am in fact a spy and you may find yourself at the end of a sharp wand and even sharper words but rest assured you are the most precious thing to me to have ever walked this Earth. The curse is my undying love, the glare my devoted affection, the cold indifference my internal regard. You are imprinted on my soul. Beloved, do not forget.'... ok so I got a bit carried away there but was that so hard? It's not so hard! Not to say it's easy still having to deal with the coldness necessary to fool the public but I feel it'd be a little easier secure in the knowledge of that one truth...
Also HELLO! I'm absolutely LOVING you're Blaise right now! So interested to see where you take this!
xxxlenaleexxx chapter 4 . 1/20
*Floats away into the sun*
I kept thinking, 'but he had to', and at the same time 'but that doesn't excuse the shit he put her through', and I knew this reconcilliaton was coming. And I was thinking more than simple words had to be done. And you GAVE it to me! Hermione's little stipulation was just. the. best.
Now they can BOTH stop all this damn suffering! Right? Yes? Please?! Just for a bit! As much as you made my heart completely wrench for Hermione I can't stand Severus' tears. I just cant!
xxxlenaleexxx chapter 3 . 1/19
shiiiiiiiit! Pansy was about to go bye-bye lol! And I'm sure me and Hermione are going to forgive this insanity producing man but I'd have a few CHOICE words before that happened. Quite a few choice words indeed!
xxxlenaleexxx chapter 2 . 1/19
And once again you surprise me! I just knew Dumbledore was going to agree to keep it secret. Wow! And is he really going to tell Minerva about his plans?! I'm always so surprised! And good job Hermione. I mean...I think she should hear him out on a very logical level. Emotionally I'd like to slap him just once more...maybe thrice...and then we could talk lol
xxxlenaleexxx chapter 1 . 1/19
! I can't even be upset they're upset because it's upsetting! This whole thing is so upsetting! Damnit Severus! Damnit everyone! Except Hermione. This poor girl! What are you doing?! Where are you taking this?! I'm almost too nervous to find out. I mean the title...does that mean no happy ending? I need a happy ending to this! Or semi-happy!
mrs.haloona chapter 15 . 11/10/2016
please please please continue this amazing story. you have a real gift for story telling and I love how you weave the timeliness together without compromising the story.
vickety chapter 15 . 10/25/2016
Please continue this! I am hooked. How will Hermione and Severus use their magic to kill Voldy?
Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 14 . 9/18/2016
Update, please! I completely understand time restraints and lack of inspiration, but I hope you find some and continue working on this. Thank you for taking the time to write what you have so far... Now keep going ;)
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