|Reviews for Riding Shotgun|
| King of Serpents chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
Good story! A sequel would be good. :)
| xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
Excellent! This is well written. )
| anon chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
Wow, that was really creepy. Well done! I especially liked the repetition of that line at the end of the first and last paragraphs; it gave it a rather fatalistic sort of cyclic feel, if that makes any sense.
Anyway, congrats on a great fic!
| whimseyrhodes chapter 1 . 7/22/2007
Wow...this was so awesome, I can hardly tell you. It is unbelievably sad and fatalistic, but I think that this is just exactly what Dean and Sam are both terrified of. I really, really don't want it to happen, but who knows? (Altho, I think the PTB will find a way to save them both, cause otherwise there's NO hope for season four.)
Again, well written, and the technique of writing it as if the reader is Sam is unusual. I didn't really like it in the beginning, but it works really well. Hope to hear much more from you!
| Linnie McCary chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
| sheddingtearsofscarlet chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
youve really done well on this, the story is very well writen, the reader gets really drawn down into the tale. um empthay i think that what my old english teacher call it. a very emotive story.
youve expressed the helpeness well, and the apathy. youve taken a possible sub plot of the series and run with it. well i dont know what else to say, um most people want stuff to improve for next time, and i think the only think that you could of described the physical ascept like what dean sees, or what sam sees in the miror or through other people eyes etc. but i dont think that needed to much because its more like a "inner journey". so yeah. i really enjoyed reading it, thanks for writing it.
| Ster1 chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
A truly terrifying and riveting look at Sam's descent into darkness. Great job!