|Reviews for To Define Treachery|
| Delicious darkness chapter 6 . 3/11
This story is so fascinating and so incredibly captivating! I am so, so very happy for your long chapters.
I'm glad that you let us see a brief moment of Tom's weakness in that fistfight (he isn't completely invincible after all) And while you portray him as cold, cruel, and evil you managed to not make him like Voldemort, he still seems to have some feelings left as he did not seem happy about being spurned by the seer. I can hardly wait to the next chapter. I also love the way you portray Harry as well, simply amazing! This is the best Tom/Harry fic I've ever read and we're only at the beginning of the story! I can't wait to find out what will happen next!
| Delicious darkness chapter 5 . 3/11
This story is so... amazing! Incredible! I wish there were a hundred more chapters for me to read. Your writing is outstanding as well as your way of describing the people in the story! This is perfect!
The part about the book was hilarious. XD
| WhichFandomShouldIChoose chapter 6 . 2/21
Please update - i love this story
| Samariffic chapter 6 . 2/12
Just found this story via the DLP compilation. I am liking it quite a lot, however the start date compared with the number of chapters does worry me. I am hoping there was a giant there, and I'm not going to have to wait six months for an update, especially with that last scene.
| Crownright chapter 6 . 2/12
I hate you so much right now
| Polki chapter 6 . 2/9
Great story! Another chapter please?
| KatzeIason69 chapter 1 . 2/2
wow this was great:)* poor harry this is going to drive him crazy so I can't wait for the next chappie.
| exaigon chapter 6 . 1/29
omg... poor harry
| SakuraKoi chapter 1 . 1/27
| Anon chapter 6 . 1/27
This is excellent, Andro. You have an honest talent for writing. The prose flows with ease and elegance. The characters you create - they feel real and complex. Albert was a wonderful character and the example Riddle made of him... well that was masterful.
I like this portrayal of Harry, of course he's much too mature and advanced in thought and will for his age but who wants to read about the average 12 year old anyway. Riddle is your real accomplishment. Intelligent, charming, and cruel, he's been manipulating Harry the whole time, conceiving labyrinthine traps, and goading Harry to frustration, hate, and interest.
It's nice. He's a good blend of human and not. As not something truly there, Riddle reads as detached, a little whimsical, and a little aimless - kind of like your story. Yet, he feels human, more subdued than his insane counterpart who, despite claims of subtlety, had motives that could be sensed from miles away. I'm curious as to where you're going in this story. Is Riddle to be a mentor? Is Harry to escape? Or is Riddle fashioning himself a receptacle. Why is Riddle going through such effort to charm Harry?
These are questions I'd dearly like to know.
I am happy you have breached the 30 thousand word mark. Given your track record as an author, I still remain sceptical. As a reader, I have been led on by you many times, whether it was your intent or not. I have invested much time reading what you write, and I like most of it. I only hope you have the resolve to reciprocate and finish this time.
Best of luck,
| The Lightning Bandit chapter 6 . 1/27
I'm calling bullshit. Albert is still alive. That was an illusion or a glamoured body who got bit by the train. Also great to see you updating. You are the only one. :(
| MoonPrincess623 chapter 6 . 1/26
Tom killed that guy? Or was it an illusion? Anyway I can't wait till time.
| lunaticxxx chapter 6 . 1/26
| shoshanna benne hachochim chapter 6 . 1/26
Thank you so much for the regular updates. It is so hard to find an engaging story that is actually being kept up with, that i am continually surprised each time you spew yet another excellent chapter!
I really appreciate it!
| G-Unot chapter 6 . 1/26
Glad to see you're back writing Andromalius, it's been quite a while since you've updated, I'd almost given up hope on seeing this fic progressed. This is definitely quite an interesting plot you have going, I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it and what becomes of Harry and Tom. To be honest though I had a sinking feeling that despite Harry having found a kindred spirit in Albert that it would be cut short soon as Riddle would have no doubt have placed tracking charms on Harry and simply observed what he would do. I was a bit confused by the end of the chapter though, it seems to infer that Albert's a wizard and someone who knows Tom from somewhere? Anyways, this was an excellent update, please update soon (hopefully in a week or two?) and don't abandon this, it's got immense potential! Also haven't seen you on DLP much you seem to have fallen off the radar so to speak? Looking forward to your next update.