Reviews for Duties
Neanda chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
Well written and VERY entertaining... XD Lyn is such a blockhead when it comes to etiquette though.

I only have one point of criticism: Florina's pegasus is called Huey (spelling?). Not Makar, though that name is good too. XD
chibichoco chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
Aw... They should totally be together in secret... hahaha! Wouldn't that confuse the people in the high ranks. Nice job though I wish they could be together. :)
Dauthi chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
cute. i liked it. i could completely imagine Florina and Lyndis interacting like that.
LittleLinor chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
Heh, everything's not always a happy ending, i won't blame you...

This is nicely written,a nd delicate, and it does escape most of the clich├ęs, so go you