Reviews for Tumult
framework4 chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
Well done.
superman4ever chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
This is a great should make a sequle of this because I have a feeling that this could turn up to be a great please I would like for this story to continue on.
becca582 chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
love it
Zucht chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
Excellent story! Don't change a thing.
JJ89 chapter 1 . 7/22/2007
wow that was so intense!excellent writing the descriptions were so clear. i definately would have wanted to read more of this. maybe a sequel? oh and i guess i would have killed off the general.
klandgraf2007 chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
I love it! I hope you do a sequel or continue from this.