Reviews for Doctor's Visit
Dark Lady of Silence chapter 1 . 9/24/2014
I just loved it!

Sweet and simple.

Cya! :)
VKMP chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
The banter here is adorable i love it
destinyartist chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
This is so cute! I love bumble bee! I like how causal the story is. So light and carefree. Very nicely writer. Ima read more of your stories!
tamiiland chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
Aw, nice ficlet. (: I'm so glad Jazz is alive in here; it really suits the mood of the story, for some reason.

Ratchet/Bumblebee interaction is awesome. I had never really paid it much heed until recently and I love their friendship, and when they're depicted as parent/son or caretaker/ward, I get all mushy! It's so weird yet familiar, gruff but sweet... ;v; They're amazing bots!
Gatoconbotas964 chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
Lovely narration style. I thought the characterization was nice too. Other than a slight misspelling in the sentence after the nails on a chalkboard statement, this is a fun read. _
crimson chocolate chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
3 I love this story~ The interactions between 'Bee and Ratchet are not only cute, but humorous, and I love the way they subtly express their friendship. This story was not only enjoyable, but inspirational to me! The point-of-view on the relationships between the Autobots aren't often as funny yet still realistic.

Great job and thank you :)
Fairytale Warrior chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
aw thats cute!

you should continue it.
ponygirl-loves-mcqueen chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
Aww... his was cute :) Awesome job!
Uniasus chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
Preferring infant sleeping habits to hanging around Jazz? That bot must really be grating on nerves. Cute story.
TheNightshade43 chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
This is a nice story. It is good to see Ratchet and Bumblebee interacting like friends. This story was really well written.
Kyraillion chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
Aw. That's really cute! I love it!
Ice Dagger chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
This is so cute! Very simple and light while not being too vague. I love the interaction between the two bots, especially how they can joke around so easily when they are still partially in battle mode - I really liked the idea of Bumblebee keeping his audios open because he was paranoid. Great job!
morph chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
Nice little fic. I like your characterisations. :)
Tiemar chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
Very sweet, and it made me chuckle a little bit.
Taisi chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
I laughed out loud when I read this. xD It's so cute!
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