Reviews for Forgotten Demons
miano53 chapter 59 . 2/4
Oh crud...Now Aratia will have something to say about all this...
Guest chapter 89 . 10/13/2014
I can honestly say I really enjoyed this story. You're author quotes were humours, informative, interesting and 're a great author, and I justify saying this from the knowledge that you have driven me to read an 89 chapter FanFic about Legend of Zelda with a ZeLink pairing, one I avoid with a passion. I would normally encourage the author to keep writing here, but I understand why you would not want to write another fanfic- so instead I'll say thanks for the story! You've provided me with more entertainment than most of my favourite fan fiction (You just can't deny the BlackDragon)!
Yami Umi chapter 89 . 7/18/2014
Geniuses have made worse work than this. Tolkien himself would be proud to call himself an avid reader of Forgotten Demons. Hold your head high, and be proud, for I've seen little who deserve pride more than you aftre this long journey. Rejoyce, for now your are forever imprinted in us.
I have thousand words I would like yo say, but suddenly I find myself with no more than this: Be proud.
Doomedsoul74 chapter 89 . 7/9/2014
I was here to say something about the ending but I can't figure out how exactly to say it so I will just leave saying that I greatly enjoyed this story.
Alcidis Aurora chapter 73 . 7/3/2014
I'm sorry, but its spelt Kakariko.
nobleindeed chapter 89 . 6/29/2014
It's the end! I almost can't believe it, I feel like I've been following your story for like 7 years. It's something I often like to say is my personal favorite, and I'm pretty sure it's still true. I love the world and characters you brought to life in Forgotten Demons, but I also love the way you interplayed it with the Legend of Zelda world it was based in. It's a unique twist that's still respectful of the source material.
As for your ending specifically, I think it definitely ended on a good note - the final fight followed by Demon's exit into the sacred realm; the epilogue within the epilogue suggesting the possible resolutions that could have played out after; even poor Zelda locked in her room while Hyrule rebuilds. It's suggestive of something more "real" for these characters but leaves the possibility for good, if only the characters can live up to the challenge.
I'm sad to hear this will be your only fabrication, but I guess you'll be busy with your own world and material to write. I'll have to keep a look out for your writing, haha! I wish you the best of luck in life and in your writing!
Black Lotus13 chapter 89 . 6/29/2014
I really loved this story. I laughed, I cried, I got angry. Those are the signs of a true story. The ending wasn't tidy, but it was believable and realistic.
Thanks for the adventure.
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 89 . 6/29/2014
I probably am going to be one of the only who actually is impressed with the end. It's not cliche and predictable and in some way realistic, as how much Zelda loves Link, Link was and is still chained to his past, he's a person from the other timeline, all the people he met and grew up with are gone even the righteous noble princess is gone; destroyed and broken into pieces by Ganondorf.

And yeah Link did got some moments of peace with Zelda, but reality always comes back.

At least in the end Link and Zelda ended up together again... in another life, thought they both lost something they still got each other. Link will have the shock of his life when he sees another Link and Zelda. It's really great and hell I even read all the 89 chapters, I'm surprised with myself.

Most people who write very good stories end up not updating, which I find very disappointing, I'm happy this story got an end. Even thought this is the only story, at least you only needed to focus on one story.

Well then I wish you good luck with your life.
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 88 . 6/29/2014
This chapter was so epic! Link finally gained himself back they beat Ganondorf together! Thought kinda sad that Link didn't stayed with the not-broken Zelda. I hope he comes back I really hope he does.

Now the last chapter!
Hero-of-Cheese chapter 89 . 6/29/2014
Wow... this story is amazing :3 and now it's finished and I'm sad, but good job sir! One of the best stories I've ever seen :3.
Wingsofdarkness189 chapter 89 . 6/29/2014
This is a long road to go, Celeborn. I have been stalking your story for four years, and I'm happy I came across it five years ago. Your story is epic and amazing. Your ending is not the happy one I imagined it would be, but it's better. I love Link's choice to stay with the older Zelda. This is a bit sad for me, since I won't have to check my phone every now and then for this story's update anymore

Thank you for sharing this story with us. Good luck to your future plans. I would like to read any stories you write :)
Matt8009 chapter 89 . 6/28/2014
That was a hell of a ride my friend. Thank you for writing this amazing piece and seeing it through. Damn you for leaving me craving more. I'd love to read anything you write. Good luck on all your future endeavors.
Irelandgal131 chapter 89 . 6/28/2014
Nice! Love this story and the good but bittersweet ending. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
James Birdsong chapter 89 . 6/28/2014
Good story
Parselmaster chapter 89 . 6/28/2014
Celeborn, this has been a fantastic run. I have been following this story for seven years, and you did not disappoint me until now. I am disappointed that you will not be writing another fan fiction, but perhaps you will write original fiction? That is my only disappointment. This story has resonated with me, and I have watched and, occasionally, chimed in with some input. I saw this grow from a vague direction filled with uncertainty to the grim but confident tale that it became. Ending a story like this has to be both a place of joy, and pain. Regardless, I thank you for sharing this part of yourself, this child of your mind. Hopefully I will see you around, and if we ever meet I will buy you a drink. -Alexander
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