|Reviews for Even Planets Blow Up|
| 1WitchFan chapter 1 . 2/11
Kinda needs some work. Feels like it could better...
| kathie chapter 1 . 7/22/2007
Enjoyed your story very much. Love Shep whump..I wonder what there is about John/Joe that makes him so whumpable. Sounds like a good discussion question. Anyways, my only comment is that when you shift from one thought line to another, it's nice to clarify it by an asterisk or line , or something. It took me a few times of reading and rereading the section where John had been rescused and was actually back in Atlantis.
| parisindy chapter 1 . 7/22/2007