Reviews for If You're Hoping I'll Return
Nachtweiss chapter 3 . 11/4/2007
Very nice. This is very, very good. The bit at the end was perfect-I had always wondered how Hermione seemed so normal after being tortured. Bravo!
lucy2525 chapter 3 . 10/24/2007
the flash-back is a bit random...

but i would still love to read the next chapter...

that is if you ever plan on finishing it!

Attaintity chapter 3 . 9/1/2007
please do continue I would love to see how this turns out.
Miriamimus chapter 3 . 9/1/2007
HAHA, My two-hundred wild nights with the Boy Who Lived! Brilliant. The end of this chapter is really lyrical, well done! Keep going and guess what? I'm faving it!
mrscribble chapter 3 . 8/29/2007
This is coming along really well, I love that Hermione's renting with her parents! Can't wait for more :)
thespare617 chapter 3 . 8/29/2007
Hooray for an update! I was so excited to see the alert in my inbox. Well, it was a nice addition to the story with some necessary plot movement and good HRH interaction and some intriguing backstory...Just, please don't wait so long to update!
wasu chapter 3 . 8/29/2007

I love it

awesome ,really!

so please update very soon and keep it up



ps. brilliant work,really!
blueey chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
great! I think it's quite a sensible take on what might have happened after dh. Can't wait for more. Update soon! :)
Augustus Snodgrass chapter 3 . 8/29/2007
I am absolutely loving this! Please come back with more soon...
MR4EVA chapter 3 . 8/28/2007
I like how you wrote the end part.
Darthishtar chapter 3 . 8/28/2007
It's supposed to be a different scene, a dream memory. But no matter what I do, it won't format it as a separate scene.
EriEka127 chapter 3 . 8/28/2007
love it!
Eowyn77 chapter 3 . 8/28/2007
Wow! :) Great job! I was thrown a bit when it went into italics, though. Is this just a memory? Flashback (as in she's reliving this while currently writhing on the lobby floor)? It just confused me. But you've done a great job capturing the characters. :) Looking forward to the next chapter!
Avanell chapter 3 . 8/28/2007
Finally you updated! Yay! Well, loved the chapter but I so need more so please keep them coming! Ron/Hermione interactions needed; Hermione and parents, etc...oh, and a bit more on how Hermione did at poker? ;)
palpyisgod2 chapter 2 . 8/13/2007
Loved this! why didn't you tell me you'd started it?
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