Reviews for Altarare
CuteCat213 chapter 1 . 6/28/2014
That was so cute! And the ending made me giggle like mad!
Kharlan Hero chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Nice oneshot :)

I like how you portrayed Asch, and Luke. I wonder if Luke will notice that Asch got the boots.
applepielover chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
Well written. I like how you wrote it in Asch's perspective. Good imagery and word choice.


"Though maybe he was getting a bit over zealous about it all." overzealous.

"True his uniform had long since outlived it usefulness." its.

“Its further north, so they’d probably have something a bit more practical anyway,” It's.
Starshinesoldier chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
:3 this is such a cute little oneshot.
ladynadiad chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
As with all of your work, I liked it, it was so cute and I always love how you portray Asch and Luke
Trystle chapter 1 . 7/22/2007
AW. It's so cute. I love how you used the boots to symbolize the simple changes that were happening deeper down in Asch's emotional state. It is so simple but so very powerful.