Reviews for Freedom Over the Phone Line
apple 705 chapter 2 . 7/24/2007
Interesting way to get L&L together - very hot. Despite the fact that I intesenly dislike Jason, I guess he is serving a purpose in the story so I'll go with it. Looking forward to chapter 3.
JavaJunkie110 chapter 2 . 7/24/2007
hey, i love this story! im not the best writer so i dont really have ne suggestions but...i like how u have luke and lorelai frineds and how they flirt on the phone and seem so open with eachother...so maybe play with that for a while and not have lorelai and jason break up right away.
Christine chapter 2 . 7/24/2007
Ahh wow, I never really hated Lorelai being with Jason like I did Christopher, until I read this story. Now I'm getting the same WTF is the matter with you, how dare you act like you're happy with him vibes. Which I guess is a good thing for you, since that's probably what you're going for! I just hope you don't drag it out to long. I never bought that she was all that serious about Jason, so hopefully that'll come through in the story too. :)
BurningxRedxCaskett chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
that was a very hot story...until jason showed up! why'd you do that! you are very evil! anyhow..can't wait for the update!
Ele chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
Wow, I loved it. The idea of accidential phone sex is just great and you wrote it in a perfect way. I hope you'll built the tense between them further, I don't want to see them having sex in the next chapter but another phone call would be great. ;) And let Jason die please lol.
LLfreak chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
I really like how you wrote this. Something like this would be very tricky to write and you did it very well staying true to the characters. I love how they accidentally fell into their situation.

Obviously Luke and Lorelai are going to end up together it just a matter of getting them there. You don’t want something to happen between Luke and Lorelai too quickly. I bet her phone sex with Luke was a lot better than real sex with Jason. That said you could have Lorelai tell Luke that, either on the phone or face to face, in a Lorelai fashion. All I ask is that you take it slow and stay in character. All of which I know you will do. This chapter was amazing. Hopefully we won’t have to wait to read the rest.
gilmoregirlsfan13 chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
I liked it a lot! Please continue! and update son!
glo1196 chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
Please update this soon! She has to go to Luke. She can't go to Jason...ugh!

More!
You've Got Wings Baby chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
Ok, so, I have the most awesomely awesome idea for this story. Well, it's a good idea to me, lol. So, you have luke nad loelai screw arounf behind jason's back, just as fuck buddies, and then one day jason walks in on them or hears them or finds out in some way and he breaks up with lorelai in a very ugly way and luke and lorelai are forced to admit their true feelings for each other! Ah! Great, huh?

By the way, totally love what you've done so far. I'm hooked, no matter what you decide to do.
lukelukeluke chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
GREAT story!

Keep going with it - ignore the uncomfortable feeling... I normally wouldn't have like this kind of story, but you made it seem almost normal!
SparklingTopazEyes chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
update soon i loved it
Dirty Twin chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
Gimmy more, Gimmy More.. with VERY naked! Luke on top, pretty please :)
Ms Kitten chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
Aww man, did you really HAVE to resort to porn speach at the end of it? 99 per cent of the fic was so suptle, so teasing, felt so LL and then you had to ruin the mood completely with one word. It's upsetting because it was so unnecessary and I could never imagine Lorelai say it. Everything else she would, but that word really belongs in some cheesy porn movie.

(I think you know that the reason I'm so upset is because the story, otherwize was so great)

The Jason thing however is intriguing and I can't wait to see what you do next.

But seriously, if you'd just replace a certain three-letter word and instead stick to imagery, I'd have nothing whatsoever to complain about...
JavaJunkie110 chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
o please please please write more...that was an awesome story!
Abbey06 chapter 1 . 7/22/2007
Damn. That was hot. Until you had Jason show up. It really made me sick. Jason makes me sick. Please let her get rid of him right away. And, if Jason is in this, where is Nicole? Just wondering. But honestly, I'd rather not see either one of them. Just some more Luke and Lorelai scenes. They're so perfect together.
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