Reviews for Freedom Over the Phone Line
UnaVitaSegreta chapter 2 . 8/3/2007
I'm glad that you used Jason instead of Chris. I didn't have to skip whole sections of the story because (as you said) Chris makes me feel sick. I'm really enjoying where you are going with this story. It is an interesting (and fun!) twist on the GG story and the development of LL.
rollsdownhill chapter 6 . 8/3/2007
Let me just say one thing first...DO NOT kid like that ANYMORE! You scared me half to death when you said that you were sick of Luke and Lorelai. I almost had a heart attack. I literally felt my heart beat quicken. (*reads the sentence again)* It still gives me shivers.

And I have to say that I loved that line by Sookie. Comparing kids to ants? I still can't stop laughing. I'm sure every parent would want you as their child's role model. lol! Oh yeah, and the 'freaking shared popcorn night' was great too.

The end of yet another marvelous story. It's so so sad when the time comes. And I have to agree, you're more of a 'complete posts' kind of gal. It just fits you better. It fits me better too, b/c waiting on updates drives me crazy! Especially when I know the next chapter is going to be awsome.

Do you know that you used the word penis about 5 times. It was mindblowing. Were you trying to go for a world record or something? But the fact that Luke used it twice just made it even better.

I guess this review is done. Not my best I have to admit, but it's close. Like...half of what I usually do? Yeah, that's a failing grade, but I promise to do better next time! I'm jsut a girl of few words today. And I'm sleepy, so that probably has something to do with it. lol!

Hope to see a new story soon!

UnaVitaSegreta chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
I was waiting for this story to be completed so that I could read it all at once. It was *really, reall* worth the wait! I'm only on chapter one and ... all I can say is wow. Wow, wow, wow. This is probably one of the hottest stories I've read in ... well, ever!
Crittab chapter 6 . 8/3/2007
lol, I'll have to give that hickey remedy a shot next time I see my boyfriend (On him, of course :P). I'll let you know :P.

That was a great ending. I really enjoyed the whole thing. I love your oneshots too though, so whatever you write I'll likely read.

Great work. write more soon :)
sanja chapter 6 . 8/3/2007
girl you ROCK :) you're one of my favorite writers, and this is probably my favorite story you wrote. i now realized i never reviewd anything you wrote and i'm sorry for that. i'm amazed with your writing. it's always good. there is not one story i don't like. and smut is something that is not easy to write. i seriously considered taking a cold shower after reading first chapter, i had to take a half hour break before start reading next one. i was never fond of phone sex (which is strange for me) but you wrote it perfectly. keep writing. :)
Lukeistheone chapter 6 . 8/3/2007
Final thoughts, hm let me see. WOW! HOT! INCREDIBLE! AWESOME! UNBELIEVABLE. I love your one shots, so don't get me wrong but than ANTICIPATION of waiting for your updates is what keeps me COMING back, again and again again. LOL anyway great chapter and great fic. love all your work. thanks. :)
sarahb2007 chapter 6 . 8/3/2007
omg if you continue or do another story please let me know because you are so amazing at writing stuff like this so i beg you to think but don't feel presured to do anything soon if you don't want to because i guess there is pretty much a lot of smut for LL right now and if i need to i can read yours again
JavaJunkie110 chapter 6 . 8/3/2007
little.earthquakes chapter 6 . 8/3/2007
good lord. that last chapter rocked! your story was really great to read. and hot! :D i love all your storys. you really are my favourite story writer :)

oh and if you search for ideas.. a friend of mine is desperately in need for a story where lorelai purchases Luke by auction and where he has to do whatever she requests for 24 hours. you've got love the ideas for crazy town festivals. LOL.

anyway the story was great. really great and you really are good in writing M rated storys without letting them sound .. uhm like porn.. i love that. there is always a lot of feelings in between your lines. :)

and trust me having a guy on the phone and talk about random things will never be the same again. ;)
A-Karana chapter 6 . 8/3/2007
God, that chapter was hilarious. I mean it was hot, don't get me wrong, because tht's obviously what you went for with the M-rating, but it was so hilarious at the same time.

All this talk about being sore and still they couldn't stop. So funny. And it reminded me a lot of "Damn pills" by LoveLuke10, where Luke accidentally takes 2 Viagra pills and is Mr. Energizer Bunny for the next 2 days and just can't stop.

So I somehow waited for a comment that he took some pill, but I guess he doesn't need it

And I felt a bit for Lorelai aswell, with all the being sore talk. Poor woman.

Yet what really cracked me up was the ""So, is there a slim chance that I'm more than just a penis to you?"- talk. I was laughing so hard, lso because we never saw Luke saying anything close to "penis" on the show and I like it that he's so smug now .

Keep up the good work and I can't wait for your next story. If yuo need an idea I could borrow you one or two, because at the moment I have a lot of ideas, but not the time to write them all, because of the JJ-Fanfiction Project, which is still a lot of work now that we started posting. ;)

Copop chapter 6 . 8/3/2007

I guess I didn't expect to walk in on them right in action. I loved it. Okay, what does that tell about me? Uhm... moving on, please.

Lol, just so to say: I like Spongebob :D

The call in the end? I seriously enjoyed it more than I thought I would. I guess because they've had sex for real this time before.

I can't wait for your next idea(s). Yeah, and please don't do that update thing again, like said before, I think it's better you stick to your old system :)
Fridaynightdinner chapter 6 . 8/3/2007
I think from now on i can't look at a phone without thinking about your story. :)

It was fun reading it.
BurningxRedxCaskett chapter 6 . 8/2/2007
loved the ending! your writing is awesome! you write L&L perfectly
Manni Renee chapter 6 . 8/2/2007
Really love this story! And the hickey thing does work! I had to use it today...long story!
CJtheCregg chapter 6 . 8/2/2007
awesome fic, as usual.

i prefer your usual method of complete story too ;) that way i don't have to wait for your brilliance. though, do you get more reviews this way?

the hickey remedy rocks, and yes, does work.
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