You are an amazing writer and a horrible person at the same time.
By the time I was finished reading this story I was crying and I don't know why.

Oh, goodness me. I can't believe you got me crying over Peter Pettigrew, of all people. Regulus and Helena set me off too, I must say. I think Snape would have if I had picked up on what the heck was going on but I swear I actually missed this was a Discworld XO and I was too busy trying to figure out if I was just imagining Death as a train station guard lol. Absolutely wonderful, wonderful piece.

Beautiful :) Great story. Although I feel like Lily would've slapped Snape rather than welcomed him, but each to their own.

Brilliant writing that brought tears to my eyes.

Such a sad, pain-filled story, full of waiting and endings. I LOVE it.

Nice one! Thanks!

Very well done, all of it!

I loved this. Well done!

I’m not crying; you’re crying.

Thanks for writing! Beautiful work!

One of the best stories I've read in quite a while - such a pleasure to come across this!

I see you have written this ages ago and I can only imagine how you must have grown as a writer and person since then. However your use of language is already quite impeccable here and I am very envious of your grammar, spelling and flow!

Had never heard of Discworld before this story so I read up a little and I love how naturally the image of Death - and especially its convenient Rat companion - merge here with Harry's world. Sure I still missed some references in your final chapter there though.

I loved how you didn't go for the obvious characters - Dumbledore, Sirius, Lily and James of course - instead walking a path less travelled. Your story of the Crouch family was excellent and the open ending was exactly what it needed. As a small point I would have gone for a less moralistic version of Bellatrix's journey - especially given the material available I could have seen her doling the platform forever, craddling in her arms a pathetic looking blanketed creature - which would have been both a punishment as well as a reward for both in a way, I would say.

Anyway, loved this. Thanks for making my summer evening.

This chapter was beautiful. It made me actually cry.

this was good to read ...my day feels better just having read it...thank you for writing this

Wonderful story. A favorite. The story of Severus made me cry.

This is wonderful and I'm seriously crying. Thank you.

*cries*