Reviews for End Of the Line |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You are an amazing writer and a horrible person at the same time. By the time I was finished reading this story I was crying and I don't know why. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, goodness me. I can't believe you got me crying over Peter Pettigrew, of all people. Regulus and Helena set me off too, I must say. I think Snape would have if I had picked up on what the heck was going on but I swear I actually missed this was a Discworld XO and I was too busy trying to figure out if I was just imagining Death as a train station guard lol. Absolutely wonderful, wonderful piece. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful :) Great story. Although I feel like Lily would've slapped Snape rather than welcomed him, but each to their own. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant writing that brought tears to my eyes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a sad, pain-filled story, full of waiting and endings. I LOVE it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice one! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very well done, all of it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m not crying; you’re crying. Thanks for writing! Beautiful work! |
![]() ![]() One of the best stories I've read in quite a while - such a pleasure to come across this! I see you have written this ages ago and I can only imagine how you must have grown as a writer and person since then. However your use of language is already quite impeccable here and I am very envious of your grammar, spelling and flow! Had never heard of Discworld before this story so I read up a little and I love how naturally the image of Death - and especially its convenient Rat companion - merge here with Harry's world. Sure I still missed some references in your final chapter there though. I loved how you didn't go for the obvious characters - Dumbledore, Sirius, Lily and James of course - instead walking a path less travelled. Your story of the Crouch family was excellent and the open ending was exactly what it needed. As a small point I would have gone for a less moralistic version of Bellatrix's journey - especially given the material available I could have seen her doling the platform forever, craddling in her arms a pathetic looking blanketed creature - which would have been both a punishment as well as a reward for both in a way, I would say. Anyway, loved this. Thanks for making my summer evening. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was beautiful. It made me actually cry. |
![]() ![]() this was good to read ...my day feels better just having read it...thank you for writing this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story. A favorite. The story of Severus made me cry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is wonderful and I'm seriously crying. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() *cries* |