Reviews for TEACHINGS
Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2016
I really liked how u did Riza comforting Ed
ToxicMint chapter 1 . 9/30/2016
I so wish this wasn't just a one shot, there aren't enough royed stories where Roy is the one hurt. But either way I still love this! :D 3
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2016
That was great
Me chapter 1 . 5/22/2016
This was amazing. I really don't know what to say, I just want to leave a review and show my appreciation for this fanfiction. Your new style worked really well anyway and the lack of quotation marks worked really well to portray that. Its all just so perfect! I was looking for a fanfiction like this for a while so I'm glad I found this.
mypastnobodybussiness chapter 1 . 12/15/2015
love it
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2015
I cried the whole way through you are really good at emotions in these keep it up I love this
anon dork chapter 1 . 12/31/2014
This is incredible! well done, I especially love what you did with leaving out the quotations and how it shows that Ed can barely form a thought and is "out of it", whether from the a. shock of the situation, b. tiredness, c. concussion d. All of the above. it's a very clever move and made everything very realistic. (I apologize for this anonymous dork blabber but for srsly your stories are just lovely)
ColdBlooded98 chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
The story's always a bit less confusing with quotation marks around the words people are saying _'' unless that's the style of the story, not sure. But the story itself, definitely liking it. I really love/hate these kinda stories where someone ends up taking a bullet for the other, the way you wrote it, it made my heart twinge a lot ;w;
Ruby chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
I liked it a lot and I thought the intro was really amazing. if anything I think maybe putting quotes around the talking would be helpful, but everything else is great :)
xXxMimi-ChanxXx chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
That was a sweet story! Love ur parental! Royed!
RainFlame chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
I really like the style you wrote this in. It really wasn't confusing at all, which surprises me! Excellent work C:
Starsmith chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
Liked the style! The ending was the best!
Cartoon Cow chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
i was wondering about the lack of quotations but yes it was very clear to me who was talking and who wasnt. Great story well portrayed )
Shiroi Ichigo-chan chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Aaaaaaw! You portrayed that confusion wonderfully! This was awesome! Short but sweet!
Thank you for writing this!


Shiroi Ichigo
Moon6Shadow chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
The confusing way of writing fits the story perfectly, particularly if you consider the fact that Ed's suffering from a head injury, probably a high state of shock and watching someone who always seemed untouchable dieing.

I really enjoyed the writing style since the confusing manner of Ed's thoughts really highlights the emotional aspect and draws the reader in.
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