|Reviews for There's something he should be saying|
| pipinheart chapter 2 . 2/10
Loved it, but wished there had been more to it...
| oh-snap-it's-her chapter 2 . 5/4/2013
You got the characters' relationships perfect. Great writing.
| Victoriaswords chapter 2 . 3/29/2012
All i can say it had me on the Edge
| slystir chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Hey, I am really liking this piece so far. I like how you portray John and make him believable. He realizes that he should be helping Dean deal with what his coach did, but he can't think what to say. Put in his place I feel sure I would be shocked speechless by the horror of seeing a child, especially my own, threatened this way. One thing I sort of didn't get was how the coach fought with John and kept going with Dean. Sort of out of character for pedophiles. They are normally able to gloss over their actions because they cover their tracks with the child's caregivers so very well. That's one of the things they cover in the basic parenting manual that we get in the hospital when we have a child in Ontario. Or at least I got one anyways. If molesters acted like this guy, they would all get caught. They don't get caught because they are very cautious. Wierd huh? Oh, by the way I really like the echoing line from the begining at the end. One note about it though, they word you used, "lesson". It means a session of instruction. I think you mean lessen. As in to reduce in size. You worked so hard on the echo, you might just want to change that...even if it is a few years later.
| frostfalcon chapter 2 . 11/20/2011
Very nicely handled, I can't believe I haven't left a review yet since I've come back to this one a number of times to re-read it. You handled a difficult subject very well. Thanks for taking the time to share this and sorry it took forever for me to say so.
| CanadaNL chapter 2 . 7/17/2010
Excellent and heart-breaking all at the same time. Well done.
| Death-Muncher chapter 2 . 2/2/2010
This is a really good story. I very much enjoyed. Keep up the good work. :)
| KaoruKamiya307 chapter 2 . 7/7/2009
Really well done! I really like your anaylsis of how Winchester men deal with grief and fear. Nice ending! I especially love the scene between Dean and John as Dean wonders why his Dad didn't kill the guy. That was really touching and the way you had it twisted so that Dean didn't feel as if he was important enough to be saved even though his Dad saved strangers on a daily basis was heart breaking! Good job!
| greendaypumpkin chapter 2 . 7/29/2008
very intense good job!
| riquitv chapter 2 . 6/30/2008
great story, thanks so much for sharing :)
| PhoenixDragonDreamer chapter 2 . 5/6/2008
Oh... Oh no! Poor Dean... John should have killed that man.
*Clings to you*
| Cari chapter 2 . 5/2/2008
Aw, poor Dean. He needs a hug
| Birdie chapter 2 . 12/11/2007
A really difficult subject dealt with sensitively and with compassion. My heart broke for Dean and John. So sad! Bird x
| HAMUCHA chapter 2 . 12/3/2007
(Sigh)… You’re unbelievably good. There’s no doubt about it.
I felt so very sorry for Dean.
If only you continue the story to where the coach mysteriously disappeared and never heard again or badly injured attacked in some dark alley or lost his job become poor homeless alone sad guy or whatever that give closure to Dean, a certainty that he would not hurt anyone ever again, then this fic will definitely enters my List of Favorites...
(sigh) A girl could only dream...
| film princess chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
really intense story! Poor Dean! I think you're a really good writer and I picked up on one particular line if you wanted any ideas for another story.
"The swelling was likely due to the fact that Dean had dislocated his shoulder a week before and John had been less than gentle setting the joint back."
I think it would be awesome if you wrote a prequal explaining what they were hunting and how Dean got hurt. Just a suggestion! Keep up the good work!