|Reviews for Young Love|
| AngelxCloud chapter 1 . 4/30
Doesn't ask who just says finally XD
| MoonMist92 chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
this is a verry odd story. never would've thought of it happening at all. all i have to say is you got a verry open imagination. keep it up!:)
| Apostrophe chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
You asked for help with spelling and grammar. This isn't bad, better than many here, but you have problems with apostrophes. If the 's' indicates a possessive, it is preceded by an apostrophe; for example, 'Dante's arms' rather than 'Dantes arms'. If the 's' indicates pluralisation, as in 'arms', there is no apostropphe. If the word is both possessive and plural, place the apostrophe after the 's'.
It is a common problem.
You also spelled 'possessively' wrong.
| Chronos guardian chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
| MoonLightsBeauty969 chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
WO! thats was funny in the end lol but that story was really good two thumbs up .!
| DJ 109 chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
ugh that made me want more!
| Nakimochiku chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
muwahahaha! i love that. i thought their dad would get angry... but it was so cute!