Reviews for Repentance
vampirelady13 chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
Good story. Thank you
ForeverRobsessed chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
I loved your story. The concept was good, it's the first story I've read about this...
GeezerWench chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
That was well written.

Thank you.
isolde1224 chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
Wow, that was really intense. Loved it.
LouLouCullen chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
Talk about intense self loathing...great job :)
Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
Wow... the detail and description you added in so few words, was perfect. I really enjoyed this, and some of your other work!
chavamirjam chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
very well written insight into Jasper's head and his guilt. Liked it!
guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
wow you are really good! i think you did a great job at describing all the emotions! please keep on writing!
Whitlock.Mason.McCarty.Cullen chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
This peice is mind blowing. wow... just wow. this has kept me completely speechless. amazing job! i can't even tell you how much i love this! and how many stories you have! so many! you have a true talent. yes, people can write on this site, but you have a gift. thank you for sharing it with everyone. it was a wonderful story! keep writing. :)

Fleur24 chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
I loved seeing how Jasper thought after almost biting Bella!
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
kiki-twilighter-ever chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
oh god. depresseing, sad. but amazingly good.
yourfriendlyneighborhoodturtle chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
It's a good story. It shows how much Jasper regrets what he'd done and we all know that he'd think everything was all his fault. A little depressing nonetheless, but very good.
tutriceange chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
Wow, this was an intense story! I think you did a good job though; I feel like Jasper really would hate himself for a while, no matter what everyone else said. Great job!
Horsegal93 chapter 1 . 7/31/2009

this is an excellet one shot.

Its beutiful...


great work!

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