|Reviews for An Argetlam meets Aragon|
| Pie in the Sky chapter 6 . 3/26/2010
I just found this story and I can't wait for the next chapter! Love the crossover idea! I think it's the best crossover yet. The weekend is close so I hope you can get a chapter (or two) up. I don't know how busy your scheduale is but I hope that this sort of long review will get you going. Your story is pretty much free of gramatical errors (that ALWAYS makes me happy) except for the type-o's (that nobody can really aviod) and you didn't capitalize some 'I's... No matter your writting makes up for it. I also think that Arya should wake up soon. I don't know what your plans are for your story but she has some explaining to do! Geez she can't send them to Middle Earth and get by with it! So again I urge you to post a new chapter soon. Oh! Could you tell me if any other characters from the Inheritance books will come into play? Personally I think that any more would make the syory too crowed. You already have all the main characters from Lord of the Rings (which is a lot to handle) and three from the Eragon series. Any more and I think that you will have a hard time managing the story and keeping future chapters at the same level of quality. That my opinion. Wow that was more than I intended to right but I guess you desirved it! Update soon!
Best wishes on your way in writing Fan Fiction, Pie in the Sky :D
P.S If I had an account I would most definately put you on my favorites. Since I don't, I give you a ton of imaginary pies (I LOVE pie) and a lot of praise. Keep writing! :D
| Random Person chapter 3 . 3/24/2010
It's the best crossover yet! Really good! Keep it up and post another chapter... Please.
| Wee.doctor chapter 6 . 2/5/2010
Please tell me that you will continue this..
I can see that you got some serious talent, so i humbly ask if you would be that Awesome to continue this story.
Its simply amazing, i have looked long for a story as this.
And you didn't disappoint me, quite the contrary. So please, continue. If not, well, it was cool while it lasted :)
| Kaylen Cooper chapter 6 . 12/28/2009
I really like this! If you ever continue, I look forward to reading more. :)
| TKDgirl101 chapter 6 . 12/18/2009
Iluv this. Ur a really good righter, i luv ur style. Keep up the good work, I can't wait for the next chapter.
| tpx1 chapter 6 . 11/22/2009
please update soon!
| Saryna chapter 6 . 11/12/2009
Umm, I just wanted to say...
It's J.R. ;)
| tcadmiral chapter 6 . 10/24/2009
good story and great crossover. i look forward to an update
| texasfaith89 chapter 6 . 10/18/2009
Interesting crossover! Keep up the good work!
| The Giant Daifuku chapter 4 . 10/17/2009
You keep calling Eragon an elf even though and elf he is not... he just looks like one. But I think you have good potential in the story, from what I've read so far. Just commenting on that while it's on my mind :)
| anonymous chapter 6 . 9/23/2009
Hey I've read your story since you were on chapter two, and I've finally decided to review. I'm not actually a part of but i've read a number of stories here, and this is one of my favorites. It is the only story i've found that displays how i think these two worlds of Paolini and Tolkien would meet and how the characters would interact. So Thank you! I love your writing and hope you have time to continue this story!
| Yuna's Reincarnation-1 chapter 6 . 8/12/2009
cool story! please update soon
| Revius chapter 6 . 8/4/2009
Good story, realy good writen keep em comming. And if Arya gets a accident and die I wont complain, I dont know why but I realy hate her. Well keep the story going and please add the witch and the werecat to the story they allwas get in to the action one way or another and is allwas welcommed
| Magic Crystal Rose chapter 6 . 7/14/2009
Great job! I hope you choose to continue the story because you have a really good and original idea. Good luck with the story. I'm eagerly awaiting an update!
| crossMyheartHope2Spy chapter 5 . 7/6/2009
omgosh wats happened w arya!
and i love the whole switching of worlds thing its pretty cool
i hope eragon stays with the lotr bunch bc i like their interactions!