Reviews for The Errand
Sad Stephen chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
Bravo on a well-written, plausible scenario.
RenitaLeandra chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
Wonderful story. I loved that you mended the epilogue of DH. Your Luna is positively divine, she really is.
stargazer starluver chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
is it possible for you to make a full length story out of this? ven how that last part came to be?
sregner chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
Another story that should have been in DH. Thank the Gods that there are such wonderful writers (such as yourself) to put the story right! Loved this!
Mooncat4 chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
Now that's how it SHOULD have ended. Very nice work, ma'am, and thoroughly enjoyable. I can see that I'm going to be a definite fan of your writing. Thank you so much for posting and sharing it with us. Mooncat
Kayryn chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
Bravo! Just... BRAVO!
Catherine Cook chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
Most excellent! Thank you for this.

Catherine Cook, Severus Snape Rescue Squad


WriterMerrin chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
Aww. You've done a lot with this in such a short time. This is one of the best "hopeful" pieces I've read all week. I like Hermione, Luna, and Lily coming to help her best friend. I cried more when Lily and Lupin waved goodbye to Severus than I did reading the actual book. I like that Hermione and Severus formed a friendship that became this tender family.
ladyjulian chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
A little uneven in places and maybe a bit too brief? One of the better post-DH fics out there now, though.
Terpsichore314 chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
Nicely done!
Droxy chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
Bravo! Excellent fix of the epilog. :D
NS chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
Heh, a Comfort Fic, aka Therapy Fic.

Thanks for this. It seemed very unrealistic to me, but very sweet. I much prefer your version of things to JKR's.

It was good to see Luna as well, JKR seemed to forget her at some point in DHs.

Yay, Snape & Hermione! :)
Sindie chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
Oh, that was so beautiful! I love SS/HG, and I'm glad to see it still alive after Deathly Hallows.
Crystal Shores chapter 1 . 7/24/2007

That was so sweet! And I absolutely love how you did the flash-forward. Just like in the book! That's going to my favorites for sure!
MollysSister chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
Lovely lovely lovely! I like your ending much better than JKR's. Thank you for making it "all better"
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