Reviews for Hiding Myself In Your Eyes
LunarFlare14 chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
Hey, it's me, the author. So I thank you for all the reviews and pointing out my error with the summary and first half being smooshed into one big blob. I wrote this on Word perfect and the change in format did strange this to the spacing. I fixed the second half before i poosted but forgot the first. Go figure. Anyway thanks again for all the advice and junk. It is loved!


Cilly2010 chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
I don't mean to be harsh but I didn't read your story. I opened it and saw one great block of text. You need to put in some paragraphs. Also you misspelt "elder" in your summary.
grindylow07 chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
I really liked the story. You should probably proofread it, though - there were a lot of spelling mistakes and such. The story, though, was very good and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
luckyrules321 chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
wow you read that fast! that was so sad yet happy :) good job