Reviews for What If
Cammett Oelman chapter 1 . 11/14/2016
Keep the story going so that Elliot can get a ring for Olivia and propose to her at a restaurant with family
And friends. Elliot takes her to a park or beach and proposes to Olivia and says she is the love of his life and that he would be honored if she would be his wife. She said yes he puts the ring on her finger and kisses her passionately and celebrating the engagement she spends the whole weekend making love to him all night long. Thanks Cammett
Cammett Oelman chapter 1 . 1/17/2016
Please go on with this story
trinity20 chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
herma Fic! me gusto mucho... amo la poesía!
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
Wow! I enjoyed that!
taylor twamley chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
omg that was so good. you know the line when you wrote: What if he looked you i the eyeand said he didn't mean to lie.

between you and the you wrote I instead of in.

sorry about that but i love grammer! lol!
GryffinPhoenix3 chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
That was great! I loved it and Ithought thtthe poem wasgood...I also think "What if" in alot of the time...
onetreefan chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
Short and sweet. Good job.


Dakota Kid chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
Good poem. I would like to see more poetry fics from you!
degrassi for everyone chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
i loved it Spike...dont worry your father's not coming back
Choo.Choo.Kendricks chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
Wow...this was really good! Great job and great writing! :-)
KatieKat1690 chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
aw! I love it!