Reviews for My Sunshine
and in kisses-consume chapter 13 . 8/26/2007
why is her last name mason? i thought it would be...well, cullen. i loved this story, thanx for writing it! i loved it SO MUCH! oh, andCONGRATS U FINISHED A FANFIC! YAY! *cue balloon drop* hehe lolz good job this was a great story.
edward-and-bella-2gether-4ever chapter 13 . 8/26/2007
WoW really good ending! I loved your story...can't wait to read your next one!
katy-twilight-biteme chapter 13 . 8/26/2007
that was quite good!

BUT sorry 2 pop your bubbel but vampires cant tell humans thats they are vampires...they have to either figher it out or never find out or be changer or dead
VOLVO S60R chapter 12 . 8/25/2007
loved it!
emergencycaptivation chapter 12 . 8/24/2007
i liked this. and i love grease! i know all the words to hopelessly devoted. i think it's good that victoria crashed the wedding because that's what victoria would do and it made me happy to read edward killing her, again. nice job.
edward-and-bella-2gether-4ever chapter 12 . 8/24/2007
I love it! Love your writing skills!
soraloveskairi159 chapter 12 . 8/24/2007
aw! continue!
Wingless Feather chapter 12 . 8/24/2007
Its all done? aw! thats sad! lol I loved how you did that part in Edwards point of view. I knew what was in the bag and I wanted to see it. really. bad. I laughed really hard at that! lol
Twilighter1215 chapter 12 . 8/24/2007
Epilogue please.
kumikonhan chapter 12 . 8/24/2007
it was awsome!
Paulomy chapter 12 . 8/24/2007
bleedingblackrosez chapter 12 . 8/24/2007


that was so perfect, it was amazing!

maybe in the epilogue, you can have more fun with the mind reading thing. like bella will think something and edward hears it, but bella didn't want him too. so her and alice and rosealie try to get him back. hehe, that'd be funny...

anyways, fab job!
Super Nerd chapter 12 . 8/23/2007
I'm such a super nerd, i have to point this out, bella wouldn't have exepted the gifts that easly, and (because i know you read eclipse) she wouldn't have exepted the proposal that well.

but, that aside, I LOVED IT!You should write an epolouge! it will be great!
LoveisRuthless chapter 12 . 8/23/2007
i loved it!

i liked how it had some drama but for the most part it was fluffy!

we need more edward and bella fluffy stories!

and in kisses-consume chapter 12 . 8/23/2007
i loved this story thank you so much for writing it, it was, like, the BEST going back to school gift you could give a gal ] i hopr your school's better than mine
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