Reviews for Chains of the Kindred
Rouge50 chapter 3 . 1/10
2 problems I spotted straight away.
1: The Tac Squad should consist of 10 marines including their SGT. You CANNOT have a CPT step in for their SGT, that is not how it works.
2: The Chief and CPT Warin start talking about how they became super-soldiers immediately? You know, the super-classified shoot you if your not meant to know Spartan-II augmentation progress and the fact they were kids? Also doubt marines would share that part of themselves for no reason to strangers.
sonic chapter 20 . 1/7
I liked the chapter!
John chapter 23 . 12/25/2017
Well nice story .. But there are some issues with in regards to Chaos magically taking over UNSC personal ., Which is the simple fact that the UNSC have never had any contact with the warp. Thus are very much like a human version of the TAU in that regard. So the parts to do with Chaos likely wouldn't happen . Now the UNSC being invaded by some other faction is very possible. Maybe you can do something with that. Maybe Orks or Nids show up . They typically like attacking anything for the hell of it. So yeah needs some work and research on the UNSC. Oh and the MA5 uses titanium encased AP FMJ rounds not incendiary rounds. The UNSC really doesn't have a need for incendiary rounds as most of their enemies wear heavy armor and shielding AP rounds work better normally against armor.
Another S.T.A.L.K.E.R chapter 3 . 11/22/2017
Ha, nice bit aboutbeing saved from genocidal empire of religious fanatics by another genocidal empire of religious fanatics". And porn.
FIATEOB chapter 23 . 11/11/2017
Hello, i just finished all 23 chapters and as a fanatic halo fan am loving it ( and although i am considerably less knowledgable in it, i do love 40k alot) however with the battle of voi on the way, that means so is the events of floodgate. Now i am more than aware that compared to chaos and the IOM, the unsc and covies are mere ants, so i understand the showing off of that difference, like with the SPARTEN III aww of the space marines, however i would like for the tables to flip here and there, let 40k be surprised by the power of something in the halo series, almost the whole story halo has been dominated by 40k, but with floodgate this could be fliped, the flood are a truly horrorfying enemy and they are more than capable of competing with 40k, so maybe let the spacemarines get a taste of them, being that the flood use whatever bodies they have to there max capabilities ( like human combat forms strong enouph to throw cars) let space marine get infected and wreak havok upon his sqaudies, imagine a flood space marine ripping one its brothers in half before getting blasted with a melter. Halo needs a chance to show off that it has something for even 40k to respect.
Pyromania101 chapter 1 . 7/5/2017
This story is AWESOME! The mixing is excellent, the dialogue memorable, the fight scenes intense. It's just an awesome story.
Zoltan-Atreyu chapter 22 . 6/26/2017
no matter how many times I read this its still as good as the 1st time
Wom1 chapter 23 . 5/28/2017
I have to say that this story has been fantastic. It started kind of dull and like other stories I've seen but it has evolved into a story that is very enjoyable. Also in terms of other species surviving the halos. The eldar craftworlds traveled through the webway to trade in the old empire if i rember right so they would be in the warp when it went off. However they always liked staying in a tiny little corner not talking to anyone so wouldnt affect anything besides i imagine they wouldnt wonder but instead rebuild. For the orks they are guaranteed to survive halos due to the fungus. Halos affect all beings withe a centeral nervous system but ork sporrs that are yet to grow as well as the actual mushrooms that they use for stuff like makeing beer and that produce spores as well have no nervous system. As for why there not there maybe they have fealt no motivation to go to space because those that did end up going into space found nothing and so are still feral
HalcyonDays14 chapter 23 . 5/25/2017
Wow, just finished all 23 chapters in one day, and what I saw was glorious. Those Thai life insurance commercials couldn't move me, yet this story made me shed a few tears with it's sheer epicness several times. Seriously dude, I hope you continue this someday.
Zoltan-Atreyu chapter 23 . 5/24/2017
This. words are hard to use for how beautiful this story is
turoo chapter 23 . 4/22/2017
Fantastic
death korp commissinar chapter 7 . 4/15/2017
titan for the win!
Stev chapter 23 . 4/9/2017
This story is fantastic!
BlackViper chapter 23 . 3/22/2017
Very, very good! I hope you will continue!
Dreaming of Glory chapter 21 . 3/13/2017
"The Blood Ravens have established a Castellum at Uluru." I hope you don't mean within Uluru because, Australians such as myself have this thing, where you don't fuck with Uluru. Because A: Laws and Stuff. B: It is believed you would be cursed and C: Aboriginals are quite protective. Bar that love your work keep it up!
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