Reviews for Fukai
paskuda chapter 6 . 1/16/2017
This st ory has one problem. And it's our dear Itachi. Though everyone is pretty ooc here, this is beyond ooc. It is completely different person, I doubt there even was such a weak, selfish and egotistic character in the whole Naruto canon at all. Stupid too, for even I know not to make such rush decisions while you're in a bad mood, depressed, drunk or stoned, and the guy is supposed to be a genius. It is obvious what the author was trying to accomplish wi th his death, as every event in the story is pretty much parallel with the canon situations, but... Canon Itachi was positive (even if it was a pile of bullshit, he believed it to be true) that his death will bring Sasuke peace of mind and desire to live. Here instead one is occupied with his own fears and problems, and the other is drinking tea and joking on the same spot where his dead brother lay a week ago. That kind of thing should take him months to recover, if not years. It's hard to believe in some real feelings between them.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/4/2014
Wonderfully written, and i especially appreciated how accurately you portrayed a modern Japanese funeral.

Jannasaur chapter 6 . 11/4/2011
I can honestly say: you are one of the most uniqye and interesting authors I have ever come across. Why aren't you published, or have any published works because you are REALLY good. I loved this story, I love angst. This was amazing, and Itachi's suicid E...
Jannasaur chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Interesting start.

Itachi and Sasuke are so... distant. I am looking forward to how this unfolds.
Mimi Aiko chapter 6 . 4/20/2011
That was such a lovely story. This was written very well, and I could imagine every scene played out in my mind as I would read each sentance.

I'm glad Sasuke isn't blaming himself anymore... But Itachi's death was so sad. :/ I'm suprised Orochimaru is a nice person, lol.

I loved this, thanks for writing it...
Miume Yu chapter 5 . 4/19/2011
That was a horrible chapter. But not because I didn't like it, but because it was sad...
Miume Yu chapter 4 . 4/19/2011

That was so sad.
Miume Yu chapter 3 . 4/18/2011

Orochimaru isn't creepy? Oh...
Miume Yu chapter 2 . 4/17/2011

Eww Orochimaru. *shudders* I wonder if they'll ever go back to the way they were... And why doesn't Itachi like Orochimaru? (I don't like him either...)
Miume Yu chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
I don't have much to say about this chapter other than, I like this fic and look forward to reading the other 5 chapters.
Antegra chapter 6 . 7/20/2010
I'm completely and utterly delayed in reviewing this story, having found it 3 years after it was written (yikes) but I just HAD to gush about how much I loved this. It was overwhelmingly sad and a little bit hopeful at the end and I was left with a really bittersweet feeling when it was all over. It was incredibly well written with beautiful imagery and I loved all the abstract comments in parenthesis and italics. Poor Itachi T-T I was quite surprised he made that choice but I guess it kinda fits in the canon-verse that way. And while I wish that there was a happier ending in all this I feel like it wouldn't be such a great story if it had been different. Damn you and your great angst writing lol I hope that you continue to write Itachi/Sasuke stories they're amazing.
thedreadedlurgy chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
Whenever I want some Sasuke/Itachi fics, I come to you.
Akatsuki210 chapter 6 . 9/27/2009
This was a really good story, although very sad (but then, the canon story of the brothers is sad too, so I guess that's fitting). Throughout the story (and in your other stories too), you show a great talent for description and atmosphere. It was a bit odd to see Orochimaru actually being a nice person, though...
Jellybean06 chapter 6 . 8/29/2009
This feels it finished? Well, even if it's not, it seems unlikely that an update will be coming. Nevertheless, it's a wonderful story, and the way you write is stunning, as always.

"Poisons named Guilt and Deceit - though you won‘t find those names on any periodical chart. You won’t find them anywhere but inside a person. In their heart."

That killed me. Really, I am dead right now.

But despite all the angst, you left us with an optimistic ending...? "Help me live."

Anyways, thanks for sharing. I really enjoy reading what you write.
Jellybean06 chapter 5 . 8/29/2009
Oh my god. I don't know what to say. I swear, my heart stopped for a second after I read that Itachi was dead. You just-you write so well, the emotion and all the fun little metaphors you work in there, and it's beautiful despite being so, so sad.

I loved the scene with Kisame and Sasuke because it was honest, and it just seemed right, I guess.

Are you making Orochimaru a bad character or not? He seems...alright, but...
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