Reviews for In the Beginning
Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2017
Um seriously...where is the sequel to this...cuz now that iv read this prequel im really pumped to read "Jesus what the hell is that"...but its nowhere to be found and thats annoying
Pat123 chapter 1 . 2/1/2017
this is so good
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2015
Can you make a sequel to this...I find the story so sweet and relax... And I want to see how their relationship progressed.. Just a oneshot sequel! Pls.
BlackProdigy chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
Very nice. Love the way you include Kyuubi...not many do that; and Naru was soooo adorable. XD.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
Wow! Can't wait for the sequel will it be posted soon?
Yami no Tsuki chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
Ehehehe... That was awesome XD
mizscha chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
did you remove "jesus what the hell was that" or you're putting it at another website? awww too bad, wanna read it so bad. and this prequel is good too.
starlighttauriel chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
I want to read this, but where's the story that this is the prequel of? Thanks.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
wow really good can't wait for the sequel!
fleetinghope07 chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Love this story! But I was wondering what happened to 'Jesus what the hell was that's
K.Henderson chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
Read this one a few time and "Jesus What the Hell was That?"

Was wondering what happened to that particular story.
skyglazingMaro chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
a sexually frustrated Itachi is totally hilarious and for so long to. I loved this story and thoroughly enjoyed it
BRAC3 FAC3 chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
nice. but where's "what the hell was that?"
nora chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
love it, but i didnt see "jesus, what the hell was that". please ... me needs it.
Nique13 chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
I've read this story a few times already.

Where is "Jesus What the Hell was That"?
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