|Reviews for Trespassing|
| DarkAngel620 chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
This is... it's just... wow. Honestly. I'm not sure how you did it but you seem to have PERFECTLY captured his character, the very esence of Blackheart, a hard thing to do mind you. It's beautifully written and I just loved how it seemlessly fit into the the movie scene at the end there. Awesome job. :D
| Luvisia chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
Beautiful. So... vivid... deep...
| chalicity chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
bravo! very well-written an fitting to the character. i love the feel of this. bravo, indeed! :D
| Lykaios Garou chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
That. Was. Awesome. Pure and simple.
| tyrna chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
Very nice. Your style is rather unique in that it seems... archaic (from a different time period, to be more precise) Blackheart's thoughts would definitely make any theologian pause and consider if he could truly repent. Bravo.
| Invader-Hime chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
This was a pleasant bit of Blackheart fiction. He's quite round for a bad guy and you explored this well. _
| Princess Artemis chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
I have never seen the movie, nor knew much of the comic, but I don't think that matters in the slightest. This is wonderfully evocative and thoughtful, thought provoking.
Though the book is spelled Revelation...an easy error but one that did jar a bit.
| mithrilxmoon chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
This is beautifully written. I've envious of how effortlessly your prose flows. You've made Blackheart even more, much more, intriguing than he is in the movie (I've never read the comic...). His theological musings are wonderful and mind-boggling. You must write more!
| cybergaki chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
Oh. I liked this very much. Very well written and true to character. I can picture Blackheart doing this very thing.
| Nightmare Anatomy chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
Amazing! I love the ending - a LOT! I really like how it tied into the story...and the way you captured Blackheart's personality! I can image him saying those exact lines in the movie! Once again, terrific job!
| Topgallant chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
Excuse me, did you hear that sound? Oh, I believe it was my jaw dropping to the floor.
Amazing, stunning work. Your descriptions and writing style simply flowed through the story, and the dialogue was excellent. You captured Blackheart's personality flawlessly.
In my personal opinion, you're one of the few people who portrayed him accurately on this entire website.
I also like the way that you tied it off cleanly into the movie.
I'd love to hear more of him. Well done!
| Kagomegir chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
Amazing, i have never red anything like that. good job, i request another one from blackheart. you are very talented. thanks alot.
| Ayame-the-Oreo chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
Geez, your like a professoinal or something because that was really good. You need to write more like that.
| blueangel994 chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
Wow! I really really like Ghost Rider. The way people are about Harry Potter, that's how I am with GR, almost. You have an incredible writing talent! Your description of details are amazing to say the least, and you describe things so vivid that I would've never thought to even bother putting in a story. Keep up the good work! :D
| FlyingFish15 chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
Wow! Very well written, you certainly have a flair for description; it was so real! And I really like your portrayal of Blackheart, keeping him in character while showing a lot more depth to him then we ever saw in the movie. A very good read indeed! *adds to favorites*