Reviews for Birth of the Storm Toa
Skye Lee chapter 6 . 8/19/2008
Hi hi, i think the best thing for you to do with your writers block problem is to listen to some music. This helps me a lot when i have writers block, and i'll tell you what. I'll ponder on your story at the part its at right now, and i'll give you an idea if one springs up. Deal?
Lielac chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
owowow OWIE ow my head hurts...

Tip: New paragraph for new speaker! Even if they say one word... smushed up HURTS! May I mention it also makes the story seem longer? :D

Good story, but separate those speakies!

WereWolfPrincess1215 chapter 4 . 10/30/2007
That was a good chapter! Nice! I look forward to reading the next!
TheTwilightMoon chapter 3 . 10/9/2007
aw! I love this! lol, good job! i await the next chappie!
WereWolfPrincess1215 chapter 1 . 10/2/2007
Nice job, Sorya! Very well done! -claps- Nice!
Mata-NuiXIII chapter 3 . 10/1/2007
go on i like this story
WereWolfPrincess1215 chapter 2 . 7/30/2007
I have a neam for Sorya. How about Tempest Nuva? kinda?

How about Umbra for her mom?

How about Windingo for her dad?
Saya Moonshadow chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
I'm guessing it will be a MatauSorya or a NujuSorya then?

The format still needs some work; a new paragraph should be started when someone starts speaking.

And also, capitalization and punctuation is needed a bit.

Other than that, it's a promising start. ) Keep writing.