Reviews for Afterthoughts
Phoenix's Inferno chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
touching ‹3
Prim the amazing chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
I love ho well written this was, seriously
HappyDeathFairy chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
Awesome story!
alexaa chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
you really captured the relationship i think these two share, really well written.
SammyQuill chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
I'm often on the lookout for good Pein/Konan fics because these two characters are so hard to do justice to. But you seem the have no problem with it at all.

Really well done, the story unfolded in front of my eyes rather than words across a computer screen. And for that alone, I applaud your skill!

Of course, you should be given a lot more credit than that seeing as your characterization was as perfect as it could get and the tone and mood of the story was so melancholy, sweet and riveting at the same time. Well done in getting everything across in such a beautiful way.
godsangel13 chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
beautifully written
Fluffy Sheep chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
This is short, but it didn't need to be longer.

You conveyed perfectly the relationship between the two. I liked how they didn't need words to say what the needed to say.

It was beautiful.
DeidaraIsGod chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
Nice story!
AnimeXisXmyXstyle chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
I loved this one shot. It was so cute. You made it so someone could think of it in a romantic or just friendship kind of way. ]
Mellow Penelo chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
I loved the entire tone of this oneshot. I think it really fit Konan and Pein, they're just so serious and intense! You have them spot on. This is their relationship in my mind and you captured it perfectly.

I really loved that you gave a bit more depth to Pein and his respect for his members. I think there are moments where he see them as HIS members, like his kids. Ha, but maybe that's just me. :P

Anyway, I really loved this. Thank you!
icecreamlova chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
This is wonderful, and insightful especially when I look at how you wrote it so early on, before more information came out. You HAVE to write more on these two, pairing or not, main characters or not (I'd love to see how this plays out in One of the Cool Kids.) because there aren't enough stories on Konan, and fewer written with talent and skill like this.
Rinhail chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
Always pleasing to read stories involving Pein.
HeyDuncan chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
holy effing cow. that was touching... I'm even crude when I'm being sensitive. isn't that nice? I'm sorry, I mean well. Please understand... you may be confused. Okay; This is a one could have done a better job with this, I'm sure. Urgh, that was just so.. perfect. It was such a well-done fic. I wish I were more articulates so I could explain... I just feel utterly grateful for your updates. Thank you. Thank you for putting in effort, and POSTING this when you could have just as easily kept it to yourself or your friends or whatever, but this makes my day..
Luna Riven chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
Aw... that's so sweet and so sad and so beautifully written. You're such a talented writer.
NeisharieLasharie chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
Wow...
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