Reviews for Clarity, Her Tomb
Anonymous chapter 1 . 8/26
Wat wait wait end of prologue? Continue please holy crap please
Magic Midnight Mist chapter 1 . 4/30
This is very confusing to me, maybe I'll understand it later but I like it!
TheOneThatGotAway99 chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
oh, honey, you're in for a treat
Okay. Offically and completely mindskrewed right now. Reality is but perception and the mind's attempt at piecing information together; which means, reality is all in your head. And what are dreams but the imaginings of the subconsious mind? What seperates what we perceive as reality and what we believe to be dreams? According to this story: Nothing. Amazing work. Simply stunning writing. The dark imagery, the dialog, everything is a mastery of horror and confusion. Sincerely hope this will one day be continued.

'The way to madness is not a fog / but clarity, her tomb.' "'Oh god, please don't let it be my swords,' he thought."' 'Don's computer crashed to the floor. . . Don's computer on the table. Damn it.' '"I'm going to go now," Don said warmly. "Don't worry, it's almost over.". . . "And Leo? Remember, you're right handed." . . . "So cut out your left eye last."' '"I wasn't talking about your hand."' '"But it'd be better if you were dreaming," he said. "That means you can stay here forever, right?"' 'The candle flickered and he thought he saw his father smile, but then it was gone.' '"You sure you ain't dead?"' '"Or what," Don echoed.' '"Stop." When he opened his eyes, he was alone again.' 'The bed sat on top of the placid water. Leo stared. Mikey was missing his mask. . . Mikey was missing his eyes. . . he seemed only half there. Too still. . . Mikey laid in it . . . He was giggling. Leo turned and ran.' 'Leo jerked back harshly, entire body coiling up. No. Yes. Flip side.' 'Nothing. . . No answer. . . There was no answer. . . No answer.' 'the rabbit hole has no stairs. . . it has no stairs. . . it has no stairs. . . it has no stairs. . . it has no stairs. . . it has no stairs. . . just a bottom. . . oh, honey, you're in for a treat'

-TheOne
I wish to Fly chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Can you please ontinue? I really enjoy the insanity, is he awake or asleep?, what's going on?
SleepingSeeker chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Wow! Just wow! You captured the heady feeling of a nightmare so perfectly! I am again, amazed by your talent :D can't wait to read on!
Just Another Hell Raiser chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
So, I'm reading this, it's about midnight, I'm alone and...well. You wrote the damn thing, you can imagine. I find Mikey the creepiest, every scene that includes Mikey is somehow horrifying.

Obviously this is superbly written, and you really know how to get the heebie-jeebies going in a reader. For the most part the scenes are bizarre, and then there's just the right amount of Just Plain Scary, like the bed scenes. They just...I dunno man. Good work there, all I gotta say.

So obviously Leo's having some trouble differentiating between dreams and reality. Horror-show in itself. It this all being caused by that wound he got? When Donnie was talkig about infection, saying he wasn't referring to his hand, was that a dream or was it talking about the rather mysterious cause of his temporary laspe of sanity?

Either way, this is all increadibly interesting, and now Imma go find a happy, brainless little one-shot filled with fluff before I go to bed, thankyouverymuch. Kudos for making that necessary, in all honesty :)

ash
Laziness Incarnate chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Auuuugh I'm going to have nightmares.
TMNT Redneck chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
That just drove me INSANE! It was extremely good, it made me confused. NOTHING SEEMS REAL ANYMORE! *sobs* I REALLY hope you update soon!
lovova chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
I'm certain I've reviewed for this before, but in case I was an idiot and didn't, here it is now. This is awesome. Even though it's only one chapter and from, like, a million years ago, this should still have way more reviews then 29. Seriusly, the suspense and emotion in this first chapter. Bloody brilliant. Now, I get that at this point it's pretty much decided that this story is abandoned, but I'm favoriting it anyway, just because I think the first chapter will be worth a re-read one day. Great job!
kanah chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
wait wait wait im confused
XxXAngelic-ChiiXxX chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
**blinks three times** Oh my god...I think I'm in love with this story...
Michael J Angelo chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
Creepy, confusing, but so completely and utterly awesome~~ 8D

The last part is so omnimous, I really love it!

It's been a while, but I'm definitely putting it on my alerts. :3
WebMistressGina chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
I know it's been forever, but have you considered finishing this? It may not be the Freddy/Jason horror that you may have been going for (if that's what you were going for), but it does have that sepense/thriller that I think a lot of movies are missing.

It's kinda Hitchcock and I do have a thing for Hitchcock-like reads.

So...did you/are you going to finish?
Jo Dawn chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
Highly intriguing and very well written. I look forward to more. Well done.
starblade12 chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
Wow! This is so creepy. Do you plan on continuing this (please please pretty please), it's quite good so far.
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