Reviews for Catching the Flower, Keeping her Near
tessa chapter 1 . 9/11/2015
I love this story, please write more chapters! You ended on a cliffhanger!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2015
Quidditch wouldn't interest lily. She'd be smart enough to know that he'd deliberately try not to score. A test would be a better bet
Guest chapter 2 . 8/28/2015
Love lily/james fanfiction And this was a great one for me.
mmma chapter 38 . 2/9/2014
Are there gonna be anymore chapters?
lily chapter 38 . 10/17/2013
beautiful. update the next soon
Guest chapter 38 . 10/14/2013
Come on he didnt tell her his major secret TILL NOW!? R u insane or wht? And tooooo fluffy, got tired of it. Sorry for the rant but... I think it preety much deserves that
Prongs' Flower chapter 38 . 1/4/2013
I loved it! This is amazing! UPDATE PLEASE! I beg you!
Hannah chapter 38 . 12/22/2012
Guest chapter 11 . 10/24/2012
you'd kinda made james a bit possesvive to be honset
kavictoria chapter 7 . 5/2/2011
Good story! Oh and we also play "Would You Rather" in the US.
D00rFr4m3 chapter 38 . 3/26/2011
. Why must it end!
sammiepop chapter 22 . 1/14/2011
noo i wanted to cry at this so bad... i knew she wouldnt die but still!
Jasmine-Potter93 chapter 12 . 1/12/2011
You've got to have some more substance to the story. Lily can't just slap James, or cry, or keep running away. She's strong. Yes, James takes away some of her strength of character, but there needs to be more to the story. It's a bit cliche'. "Before the Fawn" by adelyn kingsley. Please read this and you'll know what I mean. Don't get me wrong, your story isn't terrible, it just needs mmre to the plot than snogging, fighting and making up.
lovingyourstory chapter 38 . 10/29/2010
Hey, wow thi story is amazing... ihave to say the, the chapters with voldemort were a bit shaky and unreal.. but besides that i loved it.. please do write more... the story is bad unfinished
Doctor Clementine Who chapter 8 . 10/23/2010
this made me laugh! hehe
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