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DayDreamingDormouse chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Wow... something really dark. Not many people write like that and it needs getting used to but I like it nonetheless!

Thanks for posting and keep writing like that!
silent-voices chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
Br. So dark and it goes so deep. It's... wow. It's everything and more.

Thank you so much.
mexicola chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
The format jarred at first, but as I got further into the fic, I saw that it's rather necessary - it wouldn't be the same if it were normally written, and it adds to the mood.

It took me a few read-throughs to fully understand what was happening, stupid as it sounds. I wasn't sure why Hermione was killing Ron and Harry, but I think it has something to do with Voldemort (going on the "The things a mudblood can do" bit, and the references to the locket).

Also, you misspelled "bruising" ("Biting her lip. Brusing her shoulder") and "elusive" ("Hermione clutching the fabric to her chest, the ellusive locket underneath").

All that said, the prose is gorgeous, to such an extent that I've decided to read more of your stories. :]