Reviews for The Funeral
P chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
wonderful and sad... a lovely piece...
LeolaElain chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
It's such a bitter sweet story. I loved it. Well done, Blue.

~ Ashy
Mini Nicka chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Very good Sev/Lil
Bluishorbs chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
sweet :)
salzgurke chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
What a wonderful and moving little piece of writing. The last sentence finally broke my heart.. *sniff*

Thank you very much for sharing this!
IcyFire123 chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
wonderful. you captured their relationship beautifully. *cry*
Athena Keating-Thomas chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
That was heartbreaking, and well written! You used sense-imagery so well and realistically. Thanks for sharing this. I hope to see lots more Snape fic from you in future...
odogoddess chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
Sweet, sad, lovely. I'd love to read more of this, or more Snape/Lily vignettes if you write them. Thanks for sharing.
flamethrowerqueen chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
*smiles* This was sad, but beautiful. In recent fanfics that have popped up after DH, I have come to love the one-sided, almost relationship between these two. The dynamics and the hidden, suppressed emotions within it are very enjoyable to read about. Very nicely written.
duj chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
Persephone Lupin chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
Lovely little story! And goes very well with canon.
Ras1 chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
I think you captured Severus well.
SexxiNElusive chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
that was simple and cute, it was kinda the sevlil that is was looking for, though it was not really in character, who can capture snapes character? i give you credit!
lunlunmon chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
Beautiful, I love reading about Sev's quiet desperation.
Sienden chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
love this. it is so rare to find such a wonderful piece of writing here. So sullen and full of subtlety too.

I see that you have a few typos though...need a beta reader?
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