Sure wish to see this continued!

I get what your trying to do here, but it just makes it more confusing and contradictory to it's own statements, you want to make him strong but weak at the same time, the only problem is those two things are mutually exclusive, if your gonna make naruto into a full demon his gonna be a B.A. WAAAAAAAAAAAAY above gennin outta the gate, your trying to dumb down his power AS YOUR GIVING IT, this doesn't make sense, Just accept that he's got more chakra and more power then ANYONE, he just doesn't know how to channel it would be a better idea, As it is, your making readers very confused, in one statement you say he's stronger the next is he's weaker, AGAIN I get it, but those two ideas don't work together. If you wanted to state how LITTLE he knows about himself now, have him go to the bathroom and rip the door off the hinges when he opens it, as in MASSIVE power, NO IDEA how to control it, this would mean that RAW power is off the charts but with no way to funnel it, it doesn't mean jack in the ninja world, I mean he doesn't even know how to channel IT into attacks. Also the whole "my yokai, your yokai" is a bit confusing, you say what yoaki she lets him use but he already absorbed enough to make his own, (I think, you got kinda blurry on this), I get you want the fox to be a "filter" for pump ups later but, this just makes it confusing. IF your going to make him a demon then MAKE HIM A DEMON, A clueless, knuckleheaded, supprising, unpredictable, good-hearted, no idea how to use his powers DEMON.

- 'He always hated the villagers for the way he was treated'
I really hope that Naruto will stop taking this and not do anything about it. Naruto should fight back...

- 'With that said several sadistic grins appeared in the crowd as they watched happily.'
I really wish that Naruto would stop being a retarded nice person. Naruto should leave the leaf village and not help/save/protect the leaf village/people...

The explaination you give out feels way too drawn out. I ennd uo skimming past them frequently.

I don't like the writing style you use but the story itself is keeping me interested. Good stuff.

cool

This Became the most boringest story when kira came.

loved your story but cant understand why it seems you abandoned it

... So Naruto will become a medic? v.v
The Story was good... but why even care making him a medic?
Well thanks for the awesome first 5 chapters anyways :D

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nice chap hope updates soon again its been long and its getting good

Update update update already

Awesome.

I think it's been longer than a few months...

It is ryo and the trade is really 100 ryo 100 yen about 1 doller