Reviews for Demonic Nemesis
Blake Night chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
This story is amazing, I can't wait to read more!

I think Hinata should be in the Harem.

Keep going, you're a great auther!
89 chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
i would recomend going with a large oversized sword or no weapons at all. regardless of poll results, i believe you should go with whatever you had planned. if anything, the quality of the chapters and the amount of reviews already recieved should be an indication that your story concepts are already accepted.

Is there any chance th
An Absurdist chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
In my opinion Hinata should be in the harem.

And as for the weapon do what you gotta do (Author’s choice)
Urgazhi chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
I would say Authors choice all the way though...

Anyways, this is turning out to be an interesting story, I don't think I have read any story where Naruto has followed the medic math... even ones with Naruto's mother is Tsunade (sp?)

Anyways... great story so far, and keep it up _
mist-inactive chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
I do not like harems in fics, but if your going to do it thats your choice, but I definitely have to vote for NaruHina, so Hinata in harem i guess.
rjkeith chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
Good chapter keep up the good work. I would like you if you can tell us a little more about the eye Kekkai Genkai that Naruto will have and some of it's abblitys. Also I vote Hinata in the Harem
Death Incarnate chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
I vote for a Special sword and have Hinata in the Harem.

Great chapter and please update soon.
Doctor Yami chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
special sword, hinata in harem.
one-village-idiot chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
Hello, going nice and strong so far.

I vote for author's choice (lets see what you can come up with), and for hinata's status, I vote not in harem. Hinata in a harem is over done. Personally, I'd like to see a naruto/fem-kyuubi ONLY, not Naruto/kyuubi in harem.
TheeInnerWill chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
Zanpak-to

Hinata in harem
Fox Boss chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
Speacial sword I say powers like Renji Abarai's, Izuru Kira's, or Gin Ichimaru's. Hinata in the Harem.
Velvet Nights chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
damn, i just left a long review but my comp screwed up and deleted it before it sent so i'm just leaving the basics..

hinata in harem, it seems right for this story even tho she isnt a haremish person *is haremish a word?*

special sword, i think sparda from devil may cry would be a good choice cuz it's has a great design and it can change into scythe for long range strikes, a lance for thrusts and jabs, or stay a giant sword for normal sword swinging, plus it can be a demonic sword and can be a great focal point for kyuubi's chakra and image. gauntlets work well as 2
S-Wanderer999 chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
Well I enjoyed this chapter and some of the events that happened in it. As for Naruto my only question is will he be a dedicated medic-nin or one more like Shizune (not only does she know the techniques and how to use them for combat, she also has other techniques at her disposal too). The parts concerning Naruto shopping were interesting and humourous as well. As for a restraunt in which to eat, is it not possible that at least one Akimichi has opened a restraunt somewhere in Konoha (and with what the Third said in chapter two,I think that place would welcome him now).

As for the issue of Naruto's weapon, first off guns don't exist in the Naruto universe (it's been stated by Kishimoto), so unless you make them a recent invention (which means they'd muskets, and not like our nice fancy guns we have now, and even then the first musket didn't have the barrels rifled). As for the special sword category, that could technically apply to any weapon so long as the creator or someone else made it like that. As for the Zanpak-to, which I gather is from Bleach, I don't have much of an idea what that is. I would say for Naruto, a combination of hidden weapons and a special weapon of some kind (the mix is due to the hidden weapons would be available at times when he needs to toss away his visible weapons or for when he's undercover, as for the special weapon that would be his main one to use). Hope it works for what you have planned

As for the issue of Hinata in the harem, I vote yes. The sessions you've set up for Naruto in training with Hinata can help her gain some more confidence in both herself and in her abilities (although her being easily embarrassed/flustered around Naruto might take some time to fix).

As for the part with the summoning contract for Kyuubi (and how Naruto came up with it) was a good twist on a used concept, it'll be quite interesting to see how people would react to seeing her walk around. As for her ability to transform herself, maybe she requires Naruto's permission to do that in his mindscape. As for Naruto's doujustu, it'll be interesting to see just what it does exactly.

Anyways keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon.
DNFan chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
Weapon poll

I would like to see if you could make his sword style santoryu (from Roronoa Zolo in One piece). It could be with normal katana or special ones I do not care thank you.

Also for Hinata I believe in your judgement.
Austin chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
how about a weapon made of chakra like a sword and dagger comb.
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