Reviews for Demonic Nemesis
Kage Senkou chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
Yo great story man, I really like the perpective of naruto being a medic nin instead of how he was in the for a weapon I think it should be a special sword. And finally in the story will he become tsunade's apprentice and sakura jiraiya's appentice or will it be like the series.
the DragonBard chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
Zanpakto and Hinata in Harem are my votes.
Flair the demon dragon king chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
Zanpak-to and Hinata in Harem
Helix King chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
Hinata in harem

Special sword. If you have ever played ninja gaiden, take a look at the last form of the Dabilahro sword or just search it on google. Tell me it isn't an awesome looking sword.
XavierChaos chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
Great story so far ,I like how your developing the plot though I think that He should have some kind of will naruto be just a medic-nin or will he be a combination of an offense-based nin and a medic-nin.

Zanpak-to

or

Special sword

Hinata not in harem
Dahak9 chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
I have to say that I like the story so far and I always love to see how Narutp would turn out if things had been slightly different by him having a special ability or some other advantage in the begining. I vot for Hinata in the Harem.

Keep up the good writing.
notinharem chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
hinata not in harem
DX chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
D-GenerationX here & i got 2 say that this was a sick chapter & i cant w8 till u upd8 again. & 4 the harem HINATA IN HAREM HINATA IN HAREM HINATA IN HAREM & so on & if ur not down wit that then i got 2 words 4 ya! SUCK IT!*insert DX music*
Cornelio chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
i vote for a katana and Hinata in harem
Doctor Yami chapter 2 . 8/4/2007
“Hay! I said are you listening to me you baka ball of fur! Answer me when I’m talking you son of a BITCH HOMO!”

“Oh fuck, he’s pissed.”

“After all, why on earth would a man go to such lengths to protect his own child?”

In Laymen’s terms…S.N.A.F.U.

shining moments of this story. and i think they should be combined, the taijutsu and kenjutsu training. they really go hand in hand, just one with sharp pointy objects.
Ero-kun chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
Zanpak-to or special sword.

Hinata not in Harem- to much naru/hina pairings, she looks good with Shino or Kiba too.

Hinata n Harem - if reviewers decide she's in Harem do it after changing her to normal girl.

Chapter was really nice ;)

Ja ne!
Zehos chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
a zanbato would b cool, also is naruto going to be a full blown medic nin? because those guys arent part of the main force and would only get deployed in battlefields. or will he b like an unoficial medic?
Doctor Yami chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
half the time i was on the edge of my seat... the other half i had fallen off laughing.
ShinigamiNoKitsune chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
Well for weapons I have a couple of suggestions. 1st would be duel tanto/short swords. 2nd would be a zanpakto/double-headed ax/double-headed sledge hammer.

As for the Hinata question I would put her in if she in the harem. As for why, she is Naruto's exact opposite. She would have an opposite effect of either Sakura or Ino.
Dumbledork chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
Excellent. I'd advise Naruto to use his Kage Bunshin to help him with the laundry. With a hundred of those he could finish in a few minutes.

Weapons? How about a whip or ninja wire? That would be original.

Hinata into the harem? No idea.
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