Reviews for Demonic Nemesis |
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![]() ![]() ![]() First of all, If you dont put Hinata in the Harem, I will castrate you where you stand. -Smiles sweatly.- Second off I think it should be a special sword type, and deffently rule out guns. The sword would be able to use its own jutsu's and so forth but anyways! kEeP iT uP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() he should hav a regular sword i guess n hinata should be in the harem sinc shes gonna spend some much time wirh him anyways |
![]() ![]() ![]() for the first pole i say your choice, but i'd like to point out that I think that you meant "zanbato" not a "zanpak-to" unless you are making a bleach crossover. hinata in harem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So its SakuIno right now? Let's just go ahead and make it the Konoha4(SakuInoHinaTen) Don't add Temari...unless you want...if you make FemHaku, if the have the wave mission, add her...Naruto would need someone like Hinata or Haku to me...their gentle loving and calm..and patient...Kyuubi seemed..idk, kinda not right...nothing wrong with her being good its that she seemed REALLy bubbly but ehh, your story im just reading it. |
![]() ![]() I vote for guns as his weapons nad Hinata in harem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I have one question ex-anbu Iruka? whats that about? Anyway for the wep go with your own choice. Usualy the best thing for a story to do is to let the writer create most everything. For Hinata add her in. You might as well becuase you've had her in the story enough to mae her a main car and also pass out from blood loss twice already and i kinda wanna see how many you can do in one chapter. Thats it really. Good luck with the rest of the story because this will be the few times i review it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hinata in Harem as for the weapon's 2 short swords |
![]() ![]() ![]() Author’s choice Hinata not in Harem |
![]() ![]() ![]() Special sword not bad but show more of his training so we con see him get better and not just happen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was good. |
![]() ![]() hmm damn i shouldnt have reviewed when you started the rewrite of this chapter...oh well...so i vote for hinata harem and chakra guns (or one that can transform into more powerful guns i.e. pistol,shotgun, machinegun,bazooka,minigun etc. and the ammo is chakra based or chakra enhanced for different effects like elemental chakra or something and becomes more powerful as more chakra is put in) bom :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hinata has to be in it for me toread it so i vote add her but not just that but one of the firstif not the first member of his harem |
![]() ![]() ![]() a gun but specially made the ones im thinking of are either the jackal from the anime hellsing or an m82a1 50. caliber sniper rifle for support since he is going to be a med nin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Special sword but make it two and short power blow sH#t up Hinata in |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool story when is the next chapter special sword |