I Personally think that weapons don't suit naruto, really. Hes the kind that likes to use fists rather than weapons (Except shuriken from all directions attack, but shurikens aren't really considered uniques weapons since all nins use them). So yeah, I prefer naruto using a taijutsu style that causes massive destruction like tsunade and Guy, as well as Guy and Yondaimes speed and accuracy. Update soon!

I hope Hinata does get in the harem even thou I'm not really big on harems. Keep up the good work. R&R my works please.

hey really got into your fic when will the next chapter be ?

Forgot to vote. I usualy prefer the author to choose everything and follow his instinct, but...just to make sure: I vote Taijutsu training definitely.

It doesn't make much sense to begin weapon training without having a good grasp at taijutsu. for a ninja anyway. and the benefits of taijutsu not only influence every other discipline for the better, but when the times comes to learn kenjutsu (which is NOT about throwing kunais or shurinkens as I'm sure you know) they will have a lot of the instincts ingrained already. And he's already very special. giving him a special weapon right away without him mastering his own abies first would be too much too fast.

Very interesting beginning. We'll c where this goes, but so far B. I usualy dislike kyuubified Naruto, so I liked the fact you were conservative and din't give him a tail. as far as appearance goes, I give an A. nice clothes and great look after the transformation. would have been an A if not for the slitted eyes. they are just too freaky. hope he can turn that off too. very nice characterization. A grade there. Sandaime and Iruka are especially well done. Sasuke's and Hinata's seemed weak, but I am biased. I hate his attitude, and I hate her shyness. the plot seem to be a deep one too. A there. C for the spelling though. Just a couple of mistypings that didn't take away from the read, bu they were noticeable. A for the length. hope its not just the beginning fever and you can keep close to this output in the future. why not use the % symbol when talking about chakra stats btw? I thought it was just an oversight last chapter, but you did it again here. Thanx for the new story, and interesting read

nice story. but the demon history part was boring. I nearly fall asleep *looks embarrassed* :)

I suggest tai-justu with claws.

because it combines tai-jutsu and "special" weapon(s) and so everyone is happy. ;)

heh. I just loved all the elders reactions. XD Very amusing. Looking forward to your update.

great job keep up the good work and update soon

I like your story but please do not copy words from other stories.

Your words:

“I am referring to one Uzumaki Naruto.”

The elders began to speak out when they were silenced by a glare filled with more than a little killing intent.

Nara Shikato actually sat up straight, eyes wide saying “Oh fuck, he’s pissed.”

Naruto Gaiden's words:

“I am referring to one Uzumaki Naruto.”

The elders began to speak out when they were silenced by a glare filled with more than a little killing intent.

Nara Shikato actually sat up straight, eyes wide, ‘Oh fuck, he’s pissed.’

Plus,

Your words:

In the world of Shinobi, there are several little facts that anyone learns quickly; One is that one doesn’t become a Kage without being the strongest, most powerful ninja in the village, and secondly, that being in the same room as an angered Hokage meant one of few things: Someone was either going to be demoted, killed, spending the next few years either performing D-ranked missions or recovering from the most severe beating of their life in intensive care.

From the look on the Sandaime’s face, it looked like all of the above was about to be added to the ever growing list.

Naruto Gaiden's words:

In the world of Shinobi, there are several little facts that anyone learns quickly; One is that one doesn’t become a Kage without being the strongest, most powerful ninja in the village, and secondly, that being in the same room as an angered Hokage meant one of few things: Someone was either going to be demoted, killed, spending the next few years either performing d-ranked missions or recovering from the most severe beating of their life in intensive care.

From the look on the Sandaime’s face, it looked like all of the above was about to be added to the ever growing list.

So please, before you start copying words from other stories, remember to ask the person. Update soon.

Awesome story so far, tai- jutsu

evil hyuuga...

I don't know how you did it, but the way you explained the history of summonings, demons, humans, and bijuus was excellent, best explanation I have read ever. I look forward to future chapters, hopefully including Kyuubi as a pairing seeing how you made it a female.

work on the finishing statements of the 3rd because you just ended at 3rd without the said or other words like that that make a sentence flow

cool i like

I can't wait for the next chapter.