| Reviews for Demonic Nemesis |
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   Turok1 chapter 1 . 7/29/2007 cool please continue |
| 1whoSl33ps chapter 2 . 7/29/2007 weapon |
| hmm chapter 2 . 7/29/2007 hey great story lots of detale er hmm on the mission to the land of waves dont kill zabuza plz!1!one! or haku ok cuase it be cool to have them around |
| peter chapter 2 . 7/29/2007 (mini-gai shows up) NARUTOS FLAMES OF YOUTH IS TRULY INSPIRING THIS FANF-ACK! gai do us a favor and SHUT THE FUCK UP! ok all I have to say is this is a really great story. If you dont have plans for Kyuu-hime then please make her part of the harem because shes hot hot hot! P |
| ken12602 chapter 2 . 7/29/2007 It’s a great plot but why do you put hyphens where no hyphens belong Nin-gen tai-jutsu it is only one word ningen taijutsu. I don’t know what the term is for the use of throwing weapons like shuriken and kunai but I know its not kenjutsu, kenjutsu is only sword techniques. you’re spelling is very bad please don’t think I’m saying this because I’m a jackass its because I like this story I’m telling you this i only want to help make it better if you wish to tell me your reasons or if i made a mistake in my assumptions Ja ne |
| Matthew Blackheart chapter 2 . 7/29/2007 taijutsu |
| S-Wanderer999 chapter 2 . 7/29/2007 Well I enjoyed you story so far and it will be interesting to see what happens next. As for the issue of the harem, I am curious as to who the two fixed girls are (be nice if one of them was either Temari or Yugito, the vessel of the Nibi). As for Hinata, after some help with her confidence and speech problems should go into the harem. As for her stuttering in her own thoughts, while that could very well be true, I don't think it would be to that degree. I think that her stuttering would be worse when speaking with other people, especially those unfamiliar to her, then when she's thinking. Anyways keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon. |
| Get-Lost chapter 2 . 7/29/2007 It's follow not Fallow Taijutsu not Tie-jutsu (You don't have to put the dash after nin, gen, or taijutsu etc...) Fuuin not fuujin (fuuin is sealing, I think fuujin in a deity) |
| scione chapter 2 . 7/29/2007 Tai-Jutsu |
| Dargon Sheinto chapter 2 . 7/29/2007 interseting story so far, i am looking forward to then ext chapter and to see what the hyuga are planing. keep up the good work. |
| EnRaGe chapter 2 . 7/29/2007 This is a pretty sweet story so far, im interested on how your going to advance with it. So im guessin Naruto won't be having a Doujutsu/Kekkai Genkai? Eh it would be pretty cool if the Kazama's had one and the Kyuubi altered it. Special weapons training... IE Katana's? If so I would choose weapons training then tai-jutsu/strength because weapons training would incorporate speed/strength as well. You should have Kyuubi tell Naruto about some sort of "special" katana or something that he can use that has some power to it like Kisame's Samehada. ) Can't wait till you can update again, i'll be waitin! Ja Ne! |
| Virus chapter 2 . 7/29/2007 For the Harem put Hinata, Ino, FemaleHaku, FemaleKyuubi, Tenten, Temari, Ayame, Kin, Tayuya, and Anko and maybe Kurenai. Please update soon. Could you make Naruto a badass in this story. |
| Kyubbi-Sama chapter 2 . 7/29/2007 Excellent work! Update soon! |
| Lloyd Neruameshi chapter 2 . 7/29/2007 he should do special weapon training and if hinata is in this harem just switch it over to the naruto hinata pairing category because it would be a digrace in this category because it should go with the other fucking stalker stories where the get the one the stalk or in hinata's case the one she watches naked with her bukugan or what ever it's called i now have made my point. |
| Havock chapter 2 . 7/29/2007 hahaha good start |