Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!Also i think FemKyuubi and Anko should be in Naruto's Harem.

...wow...O_O...that is one of the most bad ass stories I've read. My only complaint is that I read it too fast...because know I'm gonna be as jittery as a jitter bug waiting for the next chapter. I liked the story keep up the great work and...just keep it up _

try its ok

I REALLY want Naruto to have taijutsu training. Everyone else, always gives naruto a special weapon from kyuubi. I think he should do taijutsu training because he would be a perfect juugernaut. While he has no specific taijutsu style, if he was extremely physcailly strong, he would be able to overcome more abstacles (sp). If he gained a specific style with the strngth, He would be a living juggernaut.

Hm...

This will probably will sound like a flame. Maybe it is one.

This is just my personal opinion, but I just hate fics, where Kyuubi is pictured like something positive. I do realise that this is your fic and you can do anything you wish with characters... But still. There are tons of shit-fics where Kyuubi gives power to Naruto. And among thousands of them only a few are good.

Also the Idea of a weapon given to Naruto is so overused that the idea is allmost sick.

We love Naruto for his lack of bloodline. For the fact, that inspite all the shit he is put on he still strugles.

You made Naruto way too powerfull in the second chapter allready. Ok. I have nothing against powerfull Naruto. Infact, I love it. But only when the power is deserved. When he works for it. The way you give him strength makes him not Naruto, but Sasuke - It is he who wants everything given to him on a silver plate without mooving a finger.

Of course - there are exeptions - for instance a fic called "Neo Yondaime Hokage". But even there the power bonus is justified.

PS

This is just an IMHO. Nothing personal mate/M'lady. I really wish you luck with this story. I hope you have fun writing and receiving juicy reviews:P

Oh. And dont take my words close to your heart.

I,want,to,read,chapter,2.

look's good.

I hope you're going to make Kyuubi and Haku both girls and put them in the harem with Hinata since you list all three in your favorite pairings. I'd love to see a lemon with Naruto and all three of them when the humans are old enough.

I wonder what will happen next.

I find this story to be a very good one. Although, you did mispell a few words. It should be Tai-justsu, not Tie-jutsu.

is good...theirs another one i can't think of though. I use freedict cause it's above average some things they dont have but you can get the basic word really

It was like the most best story I have ever read. Excuse my grammar.

good update soon

I love it and I like your Naruto. ;)

I'll be looking forward to more.

god dammit look at your rewiews u got 25 on the first day

now my opinon is:... this story

dun dun dun

is the gratest i have read this month!

u just have to keep it up so we(reviwers) have something good to read