| Reviews for Demonic Nemesis |
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   Ksai chapter 1 . 7/28/2007 Very good so far. Really nice chapter. I hope you continue with this story. PS It is not summery. It is summary. Summery means summer-like. There were also other small mistakes in this chapter but nothing crucial. Keep up! |
| The Cryo Soldier chapter 1 . 7/28/2007 Dude Amazing chapter and I love the length to are all your chapters this long? If this is going to be a harem my choices would be to at least have Hinata, Ten-ten and Ino in it. and if anyone as read my past reviews you'll know I'm a die-hard Naru-Hina fan. anyway keep up the good work and long chapters and post and soon please! Bye! |
| AnimeMaster168 chapter 1 . 7/28/2007 Great first chapter. The character development for Naruto was superb. I like the storyline and the plot is very intriguing as well. A great piece of work. I'm really going to be looking out for this one. Can't wait for the next chapter to be up. Hope it's up soon. AnimeMaster168 |
| Drksrpnt chapter 1 . 7/28/2007 Good story so far... I like NaruxHarem P Ehm... 1: It's Tai-jutsu, not Tie-jutsu 2: Kage Bunshin is A-rank, because S-rank is the highest 3: I'm betting your Kakurete chikara no jutsu is gonna be an S-rank... ownt... lol update soon, please! PS: Is Kyuubi gonna be female? |
| Rob C chapter 1 . 7/27/2007 I really enjoyed how you worked out everything in this chapter. Can't wait to see the next chapter. Well, see yah! |
| egamtaerg chapter 1 . 7/27/2007 hehe what happened to the hyuugas was hilarious. cant wait for the next chapter |
| sandmonkeys chapter 1 . 7/27/2007 GREAT SO FAR UPDATE IT NOW!1 |
| Velvet Nights chapter 1 . 7/27/2007 are you going to add femkyuu to the harem? please add her, she's practically the best naru pairing i've read! and are all of your chapters going to be this long? great if they are but...hell man, in the first chapter you have more words then most people do in 5 chapters..i love long chapters but if you keep making them this long you might get bored with the story...and i really dont want that to happen. update soon! -desu kitsune |
| spedclass chapter 1 . 7/27/2007 Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!Also for the Harem i think that Tsunade/Anko/Kurenai/Yugao/Hana/Temari/Tenten/Ino should be in Naruto's Harem write bac and let me know what you think of my suggestion for the Harem i would really appreciate and thank you! |
| PaulRap Raptor chapter 1 . 7/27/2007 hm I like it. Hope to see more. |
| Lloyd Neruameshi chapter 1 . 7/27/2007 update soon and please don't put hinata in the harem she is a fucking stalker so please don't put her in. |
| Aurora Butterfly chapter 1 . 7/27/2007 I really like your story and can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon! |
| Gaara218 chapter 1 . 7/27/2007 I thought it was really awesome is going to follow the canon plot or will it deviate later |
| shino chapter 1 . 7/27/2007 It was great. |
| yan chapter 1 . 7/27/2007 funny prank. can neji and naruto be friends? |