Reviews for Demonic Nemesis |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is written by a Sex addict 12 year old child I think |
![]() ![]() ![]() It actually is a real currency used in Japan |
![]() ![]() is naruto still a furry or nah |
![]() ![]() ![]() My comments refer to the time you write this fanfiction. i just want to nake it clear. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay...Its hard to keep reading. i can't tell if you are an adult or a kid with a perverted mind. Yes i did read mire than one chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even if naruto was short there is no difference so that part was unnecessary |
![]() ![]() ![]() These people are trash I would of killed them already. I hate all people who teat others like garbage |
![]() ![]() i really enjoyed this story and I have to say that after this chapter, you have so many possibilities opened to make this story one of the great Naruto stories ever written. By using Narutos chakra you can void Orochimaro's curse seal and give everyone a power boost. Hinata will become great not meek like her family believes, and Sakura will not be useless. Kakashi will become stronger as well which will allow him to become Hokage. Naruto will be able to start his own clan, the council will expect Naruto to join the CRA. just so many possibilities...thank you for your time spent on this story.. |
![]() ![]() Ryo is actually the correct name the only thing you got wrong in terms of money is how much money you get for D-ranks (i know you dont care about the facts from the actual series but i was just letting you know since you got nearly everything right about the money) as for how it is in the anime 1 Ryo 10 Yen and the average pay of a D-rank is 5,000 Ryo while the average pay of an S-rank is 1,000,000 Ryo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ironically. Ryo is the currency Naruto uses in canon. Naruto nijja storm 4. Its the currency in that. Same for naruto online. Havent seen a naruto game with curremcy that wasnt ryo so u got it right without meaning to. Nicely done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can’t wait for an update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You do realize that you use the word "medial" instead of "medical" in pretty much every instance this chapter, right? |
![]() ![]() You, fam are the best damn writer, ever. |