Reviews for Doctors Appointment
twilightscallingme chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
I really liked the tone of this fic. :) It was nice to read something like this and it was well written! :) Bravo!
Triizore chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
“My God, I married a five year old...”

That line made me smile!

Teagarden chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
Great job! This is an awesome story, and really cute.
Super Cara chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
no offense, but where was the fluff?
lovelyinherbones chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
That's absolutely brilliant! So so perfect. Your writing of the dynamics between all of them is absolutely...perfect! I can't even think of another word, I'm speechless!

This has got to be my favorite line:

[“Me? Never!” said Sirius suppressing a grin.


James proceeded to chase after Sirius into the back garden. Lily watched them for a few seconds before turning to Remus.

“My God, I married a five year old...”]

Absolutely hilarious! And completely adorable.

I adored this, excellent work!

PS - Constructive criticism: I noticed one missing space and one missing period, that's it. PP
Pyromaniac-Girl chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
That was a fantastic story!

I really love it!

It was sweet and funny!

I hope that you write more like it soon!
Amy chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
MARGAUX. i love thiss one :)