|Reviews for Doctors Appointment|
| twilightscallingme chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
I really liked the tone of this fic. :) It was nice to read something like this and it was well written! :) Bravo!
| Triizore chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
“My God, I married a five year old...”
That line made me smile!
| Teagarden chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
Great job! This is an awesome story, and really cute.
| Super Cara chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
no offense, but where was the fluff?
| lovelyinherbones chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
That's absolutely brilliant! So perfect...so so perfect. Your writing of the dynamics between all of them is absolutely...perfect! I can't even think of another word, I'm speechless!
This has got to be my favorite line:
[“Me? Never!” said Sirius suppressing a grin.
James proceeded to chase after Sirius into the back garden. Lily watched them for a few seconds before turning to Remus.
“My God, I married a five year old...”]
Absolutely hilarious! And completely adorable.
I adored this, excellent work!
PS - Constructive criticism: I noticed one missing space and one missing period, that's it. PP
| Pyromaniac-Girl chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
That was a fantastic story!
I really love it!
It was sweet and funny!
I hope that you write more like it soon!
| Amy chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
MARGAUX. i love thiss one :)