|Reviews for Nothing|
| Ale123456 chapter 1 . 3/3
Aw, so cute. I absolutely love it! 3
| dmichelle312 chapter 1 . 1/7
What a sweet fanfic. I love it...
| Iceheart Firesoul chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
*cackle* That was cruel of Jarlaxle, testing Artemis like that. Lol "So if I fall one more time, will he catch me?" And wonder of all wonders... that was cute. _
| Nuitari Aquarius chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
*Jarlaxle-like smile on her face* That's so cute! Well, sorry, I couldn't help it. I've got to say it.
I hope you're going to write more scenes like that, cause they're really lovely and thrilling and passionate and everything you want.
Thank you for having written it!
| Zaphodiop chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
Sehr Fantastich! You captured the relationship between Artemis and Jarlaxle perfectly! You're an awesome writer!
| Linndechir chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
I like your portrayal of Jarlaxle. *chuckle* That's just perfectly him, enjoying himself so much during a battle, and it's also believable that he would get so hysterical when his magic doesn't work. And I absolutely love this: "He wasn’t some tenth house brat. He was a full grown Baenre."
The battle scene was very well written, just a little bit too long in my opinion, but that's just me. And I definitely like the ending.
| Ariel D chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
Thank you for the warm-n-fuzzies! Jarl is kinda mean testing his theory, but it doesn't stop the fuzzies. :P As I told you, I almost went with having Jarl lose his levitation, myself, so it's interesting to see someone tackle that.
| jarltreri chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
Woah, I swear I could see the entire sequence playing out in front of my eyes. The choreography was really quite excellent- this could be the script to a short action sequence! The ending as kinda unexpectedly mooshy, but it is fluff so ah well. Don't stop writing!